for Poems1/3/2010 c3 
6letyoursoultakeflight
Don’t expect me to be a guiding light,
I can only darken your soul.
- I really love the lines you come up with!
My shoulders are tired, too weak to carry my own weight
- I dont know if it's intended, but I like how there is a bitter tone to this, as if the narrator knows it's true, but wishes it wasn't... love it =]
6letyoursoultakeflightDon’t expect me to be a guiding light,
I can only darken your soul.
- I really love the lines you come up with!
My shoulders are tired, too weak to carry my own weight
- I dont know if it's intended, but I like how there is a bitter tone to this, as if the narrator knows it's true, but wishes it wasn't... love it =]
1/3/2010 c2 letyoursoultakeflight
Wow, I love this bit. Incredible. I love how you work into it what is actually happening, but also include all the imagery etc that you do. It's so horrbibly haunting!
Wow, I love this bit. Incredible. I love how you work into it what is actually happening, but also include all the imagery etc that you do. It's so horrbibly haunting!
1/3/2010 c1 letyoursoultakeflight
There is a mask,
Veiled upon my features
- love those lines =]
A lovely dark poem =]
There is a mask,
Veiled upon my features
- love those lines =]
A lovely dark poem =]