for Boys Like You10/30/2009 c15 
5xxchristiexx
Sad it's over but on another note, I'm looking forward to reading Forrest's story and seeing how he'll compare to his three big brothers. I wonder what he'll be like as a teenager and will he live up to the Masterson name?
But to end the story this way was good. Seeing Charity and Dalton together was cute and then getting Logan to finally admit that he likes Crystal and would like to be in a relationship was definitely an improvement. He's come a long way from the beginning of the story to now though I do understand how he can't tell her that he loves her. After all, it took him this long to admit that he likes her. I'm sure it will take him a little longer to get to the next step and say those three words. However, you're right, Charity certainly made an impact in his life. She played on his emotions.
You're a great writer and I always enjoy reading your stories so I look forward to reading the last of Brock's story, the one shot of River and Fallon and of course Forrest.
5xxchristiexxSad it's over but on another note, I'm looking forward to reading Forrest's story and seeing how he'll compare to his three big brothers. I wonder what he'll be like as a teenager and will he live up to the Masterson name?
But to end the story this way was good. Seeing Charity and Dalton together was cute and then getting Logan to finally admit that he likes Crystal and would like to be in a relationship was definitely an improvement. He's come a long way from the beginning of the story to now though I do understand how he can't tell her that he loves her. After all, it took him this long to admit that he likes her. I'm sure it will take him a little longer to get to the next step and say those three words. However, you're right, Charity certainly made an impact in his life. She played on his emotions.
You're a great writer and I always enjoy reading your stories so I look forward to reading the last of Brock's story, the one shot of River and Fallon and of course Forrest.
10/30/2009 c15 agreyrainbow
i was looking forward to charity losing her V-card with dalton =(
but it ended smoothly =P
i was looking forward to charity losing her V-card with dalton =(
but it ended smoothly =P
10/30/2009 c15 chng234
i didnt get my wish. but happy everyone has their own special someone in the end. jus curious, will river/fallon n logan/crys n dalton/charity appear in forrest story?
i didnt get my wish. but happy everyone has their own special someone in the end. jus curious, will river/fallon n logan/crys n dalton/charity appear in forrest story?
10/30/2009 c15 sane
Now i see everything, after you explain your intentions. haha.. it's a great story.
i'm one of those Charity/Logan team-up. So sad that they didn't hook up in the end. but i think the ending is great. VERY GREAT INDEED! :)
i'll respect your writing and btw, you're such a great author. continue to write and we'll continue to read. so happy that this story is done. Thanks for sharing your story. :)
Hope you update Brock's story soon. Take care and Have a nice day ;)
Now i see everything, after you explain your intentions. haha.. it's a great story.
i'm one of those Charity/Logan team-up. So sad that they didn't hook up in the end. but i think the ending is great. VERY GREAT INDEED! :)
i'll respect your writing and btw, you're such a great author. continue to write and we'll continue to read. so happy that this story is done. Thanks for sharing your story. :)
Hope you update Brock's story soon. Take care and Have a nice day ;)
10/30/2009 c15 8castiel89
Hold on a moment...I will be right back after I go sob in despair in a corner...
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Okay *wipes away remaining tears*...I'm back. I will just have to accept your decision as an author with your final pairings. I mean, as much as we all wish they could be real, and how well you made them feel real (at least to me), I need to get over it, and move on. So hold on once more...Okay I'm over it! As long as we see little Logan mini-me's in Forrest's story! :) HAHA.
And now that you think about it...Having one headstrong and stubborn Kennedy girl with an equally headstrong and stubborn Masterson boy is drama filled and bad (in a good way!) enough. Two WOULD be overkill...Even if I did think Charity and Logan would've been good together. Instead she will just have to gain up on him with everyone else if he decides to fuck up with Crystal again. Like the good friend she is :).
HAHAHA! I absolutely LOVED the Star Wars sayings! Oh man, that made me laugh (seeing as my dad morphed me into a SW nut...although Hayden Christensen was a very good looking Darth Vader...OK Amy...back to BLY). "Use the force! Work those Jedi mind tricks.." hahaha...I'm still laughing. And damn, they all knew about Fallon and River's make up sex! LOL. Poor Dalton...Charity's gonna make him wait for it! LOL.
Bittersweet that it has come to an end, after so many suspenseful and drama filled chapters! Congratualtions on a job well done, having me seriously addicted and second guessing everything about the possible pairs from the very beginning..
Looking forward to more Brock, River, and Forrest!
8castiel89Hold on a moment...I will be right back after I go sob in despair in a corner...
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Okay *wipes away remaining tears*...I'm back. I will just have to accept your decision as an author with your final pairings. I mean, as much as we all wish they could be real, and how well you made them feel real (at least to me), I need to get over it, and move on. So hold on once more...Okay I'm over it! As long as we see little Logan mini-me's in Forrest's story! :) HAHA.
And now that you think about it...Having one headstrong and stubborn Kennedy girl with an equally headstrong and stubborn Masterson boy is drama filled and bad (in a good way!) enough. Two WOULD be overkill...Even if I did think Charity and Logan would've been good together. Instead she will just have to gain up on him with everyone else if he decides to fuck up with Crystal again. Like the good friend she is :).
HAHAHA! I absolutely LOVED the Star Wars sayings! Oh man, that made me laugh (seeing as my dad morphed me into a SW nut...although Hayden Christensen was a very good looking Darth Vader...OK Amy...back to BLY). "Use the force! Work those Jedi mind tricks.." hahaha...I'm still laughing. And damn, they all knew about Fallon and River's make up sex! LOL. Poor Dalton...Charity's gonna make him wait for it! LOL.
Bittersweet that it has come to an end, after so many suspenseful and drama filled chapters! Congratualtions on a job well done, having me seriously addicted and second guessing everything about the possible pairs from the very beginning..
Looking forward to more Brock, River, and Forrest!
10/30/2009 c15 Downtown Detours
I enjoy that you're one of the few authors who actually takes the time to update their stories every few days. Then when a story is over, you get right back to writing another one. It's so refreshing compared to the people who update every 6 months or so bleh.
ANYWAY, yay ending. To be honest, I completely forgot this was Logan's story and not Charity's. aha.
And I'm sad that I don't even like Crystal! I don't know why. She just bugs me.
Ah well, RIVERxFALLON WILL ALWAYS BE MY FAVORITE COUPLE~*~~. & story.
And of course Forrest. Hopefully. Maybe.
;D
I enjoy that you're one of the few authors who actually takes the time to update their stories every few days. Then when a story is over, you get right back to writing another one. It's so refreshing compared to the people who update every 6 months or so bleh.
ANYWAY, yay ending. To be honest, I completely forgot this was Logan's story and not Charity's. aha.
And I'm sad that I don't even like Crystal! I don't know why. She just bugs me.
Ah well, RIVERxFALLON WILL ALWAYS BE MY FAVORITE COUPLE~*~~. & story.
And of course Forrest. Hopefully. Maybe.
;D
10/28/2009 c14 2asianinvasion0530
Hmm I'm thinking that was Charity and Dalton at the end...'cause Crystal and Logan kiss all the time and I don't know, it just seems like Dalton would be more likely to do that than Logan. But I don't know, that's tough. I like the ambiguity. =]
2asianinvasion0530Hmm I'm thinking that was Charity and Dalton at the end...'cause Crystal and Logan kiss all the time and I don't know, it just seems like Dalton would be more likely to do that than Logan. But I don't know, that's tough. I like the ambiguity. =]
10/28/2009 c14 9Incandescently Chelsea
Ugh...did you really have to leave it at that? Well, my prediction is...maybe...Logan/Crystal...only because you mentioned something about his calloused hands and I remember that in a previous chapter...So, that's my prediction, but I bet I'm dead wrong.
Anyhoo, loved the chapter and I canNOT wait for an update...so, hurry up, please...thanks! =D
~Chelsea Elizabeth
9Incandescently ChelseaUgh...did you really have to leave it at that? Well, my prediction is...maybe...Logan/Crystal...only because you mentioned something about his calloused hands and I remember that in a previous chapter...So, that's my prediction, but I bet I'm dead wrong.
Anyhoo, loved the chapter and I canNOT wait for an update...so, hurry up, please...thanks! =D
~Chelsea Elizabeth
10/28/2009 c14 HaNnA eLeNa
oh my God.. i didn't read actually the chapter 14 because im afraid i will read things that will really make me conclude it will be logan & crystal. I REALLY WANT LOGAN & CHARITY to be the couple. in the first place, when i have read their conversation in the library, there is already the chemistry. it makes me giggle.. oh, actually i wanted them to be the partner since in the story of *Love game*. i remembered the scene during the prom of river and fallon: the scene where fallon noticed something how charity and logan look at each other, i feel something there, i swear! so when i knew that there is the story of Logan, i really thought he will be with charity. :) :)
so when i read the chapter 13 of the story, i feel like it will be Logan & crystal. now, i checked if there is already the chapter 14 and here it is. but, instead of reading the chapter 14, i read the reviews so i can have the idea. as i have read the previous comments, almost logan and crystal. :( :( but i didn't feel at all their team up. i didn't feel any chemistry between the two of them. i didn't even giggle with their scenes like the way i giggle when there is Logan & charity..
oh, i wonder if the author (All over you) read my comments?... XD i wish she had. :)
anyway, i don't know if i will read the last two chapters because im afraid i will not be satisfied with the ending if it will be logan an crystal. I really want LOGAN & CHARITY. So i will just imagine that they are the two made it up until the end. :) that will make me happy...
oh i can't wait for the story of fallon and river part two. im also reading story of brock, yey im waiting for forrest too. :)
oh my God.. i didn't read actually the chapter 14 because im afraid i will read things that will really make me conclude it will be logan & crystal. I REALLY WANT LOGAN & CHARITY to be the couple. in the first place, when i have read their conversation in the library, there is already the chemistry. it makes me giggle.. oh, actually i wanted them to be the partner since in the story of *Love game*. i remembered the scene during the prom of river and fallon: the scene where fallon noticed something how charity and logan look at each other, i feel something there, i swear! so when i knew that there is the story of Logan, i really thought he will be with charity. :) :)
so when i read the chapter 13 of the story, i feel like it will be Logan & crystal. now, i checked if there is already the chapter 14 and here it is. but, instead of reading the chapter 14, i read the reviews so i can have the idea. as i have read the previous comments, almost logan and crystal. :( :( but i didn't feel at all their team up. i didn't feel any chemistry between the two of them. i didn't even giggle with their scenes like the way i giggle when there is Logan & charity..
oh, i wonder if the author (All over you) read my comments?... XD i wish she had. :)
anyway, i don't know if i will read the last two chapters because im afraid i will not be satisfied with the ending if it will be logan an crystal. I really want LOGAN & CHARITY. So i will just imagine that they are the two made it up until the end. :) that will make me happy...
oh i can't wait for the story of fallon and river part two. im also reading story of brock, yey im waiting for forrest too. :)
10/28/2009 c14 13eternalsnow-chrys
argh no! cliffhanger D:
(Sorry that I haven't been commenting for a while XD Been busy and lazy to log in)
13eternalsnow-chrysargh no! cliffhanger D:
(Sorry that I haven't been commenting for a while XD Been busy and lazy to log in)
10/27/2009 c14 askeeling
its definitely logan and crystal in the last scene.
its definitely logan and crystal in the last scene.
10/27/2009 c14 hkxxx
it has to be logan and crystal!
i really really really want logan and charity to end up together. please make it happen!
it has to be logan and crystal!
i really really really want logan and charity to end up together. please make it happen!