for Boys Like You2/16/2011 c15 
27Just Silly Me
Ah! I loved the references to Love Game. It was so fun to see all the backstories I never thought of. It's great that three couples got together in this. Getting to know Logan and Charity more has been amazingly fun. And meeting Crystal, Dalton, Calista, and Davis was great too! (C-L, C-D, C-D. Almost perfect.) I have to say my favorite scene was chapter 14's end part, I loved the ambiguity of it. (if that's even the right word.) Once again, breezed through this. This was just as enjoyable as Love Game, but in its own different ways. Again, it has its errors here and there, but the plot was written so well I was able to ignore them. (Congratulations. I think you're the only person I've been able to say that to.) Can't wait to read the rest of the series. I've been enjoying it so much, I'm really mad I didn't read it sooner!
~JSM
27Just Silly MeAh! I loved the references to Love Game. It was so fun to see all the backstories I never thought of. It's great that three couples got together in this. Getting to know Logan and Charity more has been amazingly fun. And meeting Crystal, Dalton, Calista, and Davis was great too! (C-L, C-D, C-D. Almost perfect.) I have to say my favorite scene was chapter 14's end part, I loved the ambiguity of it. (if that's even the right word.) Once again, breezed through this. This was just as enjoyable as Love Game, but in its own different ways. Again, it has its errors here and there, but the plot was written so well I was able to ignore them. (Congratulations. I think you're the only person I've been able to say that to.) Can't wait to read the rest of the series. I've been enjoying it so much, I'm really mad I didn't read it sooner!
~JSM
2/16/2011 c7 Just Silly Me
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Sorry, stopping by to mention two typos.
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"He dress wasn't overly slutty or anything..."
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Either "her" or "the."
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Crystal started talking to her bot toy, Davis..."
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"boy toy" not "bot toy" right?
That's all for now. Gonna keep going.
~JSM
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Sorry, stopping by to mention two typos.
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"He dress wasn't overly slutty or anything..."
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Either "her" or "the."
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Crystal started talking to her bot toy, Davis..."
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"boy toy" not "bot toy" right?
That's all for now. Gonna keep going.
~JSM
2/16/2011 c2 Just Silly Me
I'm back again! Haven't had time to read over the last few days, glad to have some now. I'm dropping by real quick to point out a line that confused me.
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Logan had told Dalton all about River's little game with Charity's sister. He was amused, like most people were, and asked about it every chance he got. Logan shrugged. "Good, I'm guessing. I ran into Fallon's sister and she says things are going good."
"Fallon has a sister?" Dalton was intrigued. "Is she as hot?"
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Why would Dalton ask about Fallon if he already knows about her? And how would he know Fallon anyway? This may just be a small consistency error or something, no big deal. Just take a look at it. Anyway, that's it for now. I'm going to keep reading, of course.
~JSM
I'm back again! Haven't had time to read over the last few days, glad to have some now. I'm dropping by real quick to point out a line that confused me.
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Logan had told Dalton all about River's little game with Charity's sister. He was amused, like most people were, and asked about it every chance he got. Logan shrugged. "Good, I'm guessing. I ran into Fallon's sister and she says things are going good."
"Fallon has a sister?" Dalton was intrigued. "Is she as hot?"
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Why would Dalton ask about Fallon if he already knows about her? And how would he know Fallon anyway? This may just be a small consistency error or something, no big deal. Just take a look at it. Anyway, that's it for now. I'm going to keep reading, of course.
~JSM
1/27/2011 c8 reindrops
She is pregnant? Haha! Well, I actually wanted Charity to end up with Logan at first, but now, I think Crystal's okay. :D
She is pregnant? Haha! Well, I actually wanted Charity to end up with Logan at first, but now, I think Crystal's okay. :D
1/20/2011 c15 4Astarael-11
Aw, that was so cute! I'm so happy for all of them, they definitely all ended up with the right people :D
So, I've decided to make my way through the Masterson series (which I'm happy about because now I have heaps of stories to read on fp) and this one was pretty good and I really enjoyed it.
Now onto the next escapade of the Masterson boys...
4Astarael-11Aw, that was so cute! I'm so happy for all of them, they definitely all ended up with the right people :D
So, I've decided to make my way through the Masterson series (which I'm happy about because now I have heaps of stories to read on fp) and this one was pretty good and I really enjoyed it.
Now onto the next escapade of the Masterson boys...
12/29/2010 c15 leavemeialone
I love the way you wrote about your characters. I'm sort of disappointed with your ending though. I really wanted to Charity to end up with Logan. I was rooting for them. I really saw the connection between them two. I love how you had definitions in the beginning of each chapter. This story was really good though, but like I said, I would have loved Charity with Logan.
I love the way you wrote about your characters. I'm sort of disappointed with your ending though. I really wanted to Charity to end up with Logan. I was rooting for them. I really saw the connection between them two. I love how you had definitions in the beginning of each chapter. This story was really good though, but like I said, I would have loved Charity with Logan.
11/27/2010 c10 2akaCHEEKS
Yay! I wasn't very fond of the Cali and Logan pairing. For some inane reason, I just do not like that girl. And isn't it funny how Logan was having a hard time choosing between 3 girls with names that starts with the letter C. I find it hilarious because the past 3 guys that my best friend went out with started with J's and had long curly hair.
2akaCHEEKSYay! I wasn't very fond of the Cali and Logan pairing. For some inane reason, I just do not like that girl. And isn't it funny how Logan was having a hard time choosing between 3 girls with names that starts with the letter C. I find it hilarious because the past 3 guys that my best friend went out with started with J's and had long curly hair.
11/3/2010 c15 TasteYourSins
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NO! NONONONO!
It hurt me that he doesn't love her...yet.
But still.
:(
Well, anyway. HAHAHAHA. They ended up together anyway. xD
:(
NO! NONONONO!
It hurt me that he doesn't love her...yet.
But still.
:(
Well, anyway. HAHAHAHA. They ended up together anyway. xD
11/3/2010 c10 TasteYourSins
OH GOD.
My head hurt from the scene at the party.
But YEY! Crystal cares for Logan. :)
OH GOD.
My head hurt from the scene at the party.
But YEY! Crystal cares for Logan. :)
11/3/2010 c8 TasteYourSins
OHMAGAD. YES. CRYSTAL. :)
Well, I mean there should've been a better reason for her to fall in love with Logan, but mwahaha.
OHMAGAD. YES. CRYSTAL. :)
Well, I mean there should've been a better reason for her to fall in love with Logan, but mwahaha.
11/3/2010 c4 TasteYourSins
HAHAHAHA I LOLed at the definition for "sidekick".
Calista's alright but I don't want her to like Logan. She's better off with Dalton or some other guy. :|
HAHAHAHA I LOLed at the definition for "sidekick".
Calista's alright but I don't want her to like Logan. She's better off with Dalton or some other guy. :|
11/3/2010 c2 TasteYourSins
This is gonna be a love triangle, isn't it? :|
Well, I know who Logan ends up with. Dammit. Suspense goes bye bye. :))
This is gonna be a love triangle, isn't it? :|
Well, I know who Logan ends up with. Dammit. Suspense goes bye bye. :))
9/27/2010 c15 4sunnybunny17
Ahmazing story, not that I expected any less. Absolutly cute and serious at all the right parts. It's so good. You have the true traits of a real author. So keep on writing your wonderful stories, and I'm now going to read Masterson series story number three! :D
love always,
brooke
4sunnybunny17Ahmazing story, not that I expected any less. Absolutly cute and serious at all the right parts. It's so good. You have the true traits of a real author. So keep on writing your wonderful stories, and I'm now going to read Masterson series story number three! :D
love always,
brooke