9/12/2009 c1 Jenna
Well... Good writing for the most part. Maybe I got the wrong impression/message but kinda reminds me of my ex. A bit of a stalkerish kinda guy... But to each their own and knowing me and how tired I am I prolly read this wrong and it might have nothing to do with stalking someone. IDK. But still good for the most part.
Well... Good writing for the most part. Maybe I got the wrong impression/message but kinda reminds me of my ex. A bit of a stalkerish kinda guy... But to each their own and knowing me and how tired I am I prolly read this wrong and it might have nothing to do with stalking someone. IDK. But still good for the most part.
9/12/2009 c1 An-Author-At-Heart
Oh damn... you crazy! LOL just kidding, but it's got this dangerous feel to it. This definitely describes a deadly obsession. I like how it goes from unrequited love to "GET A STRAIGHT JACKET AND A DOCTOR AND/OR POLICE OFFICER FOR THIS WOMAN!" I enjoyed it, good job.
Oh damn... you crazy! LOL just kidding, but it's got this dangerous feel to it. This definitely describes a deadly obsession. I like how it goes from unrequited love to "GET A STRAIGHT JACKET AND A DOCTOR AND/OR POLICE OFFICER FOR THIS WOMAN!" I enjoyed it, good job.