for Conversion11/6/2009 c13 
2akaCHEEKS
ugh i have a feeling that teren's family isn't the first half vampire out there. i have no idea why i'm getting that feeling though.
2akaCHEEKSugh i have a feeling that teren's family isn't the first half vampire out there. i have no idea why i'm getting that feeling though.
11/5/2009 c13 5charliej
Wow! This was such a great chapter! So much feeling - and the arguement and the issues were very 'real'. I loved the ending, with Teren admitting his fears...great work - you should be proud and, of course KEEP WRITING!
5charliejWow! This was such a great chapter! So much feeling - and the arguement and the issues were very 'real'. I loved the ending, with Teren admitting his fears...great work - you should be proud and, of course KEEP WRITING!
11/3/2009 c12 3Queen Of Laughs
yay! awesome chapter!
liked the ending of it!
post asap!
i cant wait for more!
:D
3Queen Of Laughsyay! awesome chapter!
liked the ending of it!
post asap!
i cant wait for more!
:D
10/31/2009 c12 5charliej
wow! You had me worried a few times throughout this chapter. It just keeps getting better and better. More please!
5charliejwow! You had me worried a few times throughout this chapter. It just keeps getting better and better. More please!
10/31/2009 c3 Rosey-Blue
hahahahahaha
that was awesome!
loved the whole thing, from beginning till end.
hahahahahaha
that was awesome!
loved the whole thing, from beginning till end.
10/31/2009 c1 Rosey-Blue
“Oh come on.” I leaned my head to the side exposing my vein and stroked my neck with my finger. “It’s a nice juicy artery.” - LOL! crazy girl!
that was so good.
:D
“Oh come on.” I leaned my head to the side exposing my vein and stroked my neck with my finger. “It’s a nice juicy artery.” - LOL! crazy girl!
that was so good.
:D
10/31/2009 c11 4slee5133
love this story. its very different from other vampire stories and i love how you make it all seem so blase and ordinary and realistic. you're a great writer. :D update soon!
4slee5133love this story. its very different from other vampire stories and i love how you make it all seem so blase and ordinary and realistic. you're a great writer. :D update soon!
10/31/2009 c8 slee5133
Hey! i love this story so far. just wondering, couldn't taren get a sperm bank to freeze his sperm? i know its just fiction and it would probably ruin the suspense of the story, but just thinking. :D
Hey! i love this story so far. just wondering, couldn't taren get a sperm bank to freeze his sperm? i know its just fiction and it would probably ruin the suspense of the story, but just thinking. :D
10/22/2009 c10 5charliej
Woohoo - another chapter! Thanks so much. The mystery unfolds as we learn the 'what' and 'why' they have been hiding from her. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
5charliejWoohoo - another chapter! Thanks so much. The mystery unfolds as we learn the 'what' and 'why' they have been hiding from her. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
10/18/2009 c9 1DreamsOfIreland
Ah. I see the neck biting has started. Hm...didn't bother me quiet as much as I expected though. And no worries, I'll stick with you till the end, if only because I enjoy your writing style. Its very detailed and realistic, which is a relief from most things on frictionpress.
Two thumbs up for Emma though. I don't think I'd be able to go bakc to that house after what happened on her last visit. She's obviously made of some tough stuff.
As always, looking forward to the next chapter. :)
1DreamsOfIrelandAh. I see the neck biting has started. Hm...didn't bother me quiet as much as I expected though. And no worries, I'll stick with you till the end, if only because I enjoy your writing style. Its very detailed and realistic, which is a relief from most things on frictionpress.
Two thumbs up for Emma though. I don't think I'd be able to go bakc to that house after what happened on her last visit. She's obviously made of some tough stuff.
As always, looking forward to the next chapter. :)