for Conversion5/25/2010 c20 jmr79au
i loved this story. I cried so much in the last few chapters, that she had finally found what she didn't know she was missing in her life. 10 out of 10.
Can't wait to read the sequel.
i loved this story. I cried so much in the last few chapters, that she had finally found what she didn't know she was missing in her life. 10 out of 10.
Can't wait to read the sequel.
135/17/2010 c19 ivy
this story is simply amazing!
can't wait to read more :-D
this story is simply amazing!
can't wait to read more :-D
5/10/2010 c7 Anonymous
Wow, this chapter made me realize how selfish Emma is. I think I sort of noticed it before, but almost everything that crosses her mind and every decision she makes is for her own benefit. Even when it comes to her sister, she doesn't realize that Ashley has dealt with her injuries incredibly well and she's a strong happy girl, while clearly Emma still has a problem with them since she mentions them constantly. I think that the reason she asked Teren to change Ashley is mostly for her own benefit, made even worse by the fact that she knows how hard it would be on Teren. I like the story a lot, but I'm ranting because I expected more from Emma. :)
Wow, this chapter made me realize how selfish Emma is. I think I sort of noticed it before, but almost everything that crosses her mind and every decision she makes is for her own benefit. Even when it comes to her sister, she doesn't realize that Ashley has dealt with her injuries incredibly well and she's a strong happy girl, while clearly Emma still has a problem with them since she mentions them constantly. I think that the reason she asked Teren to change Ashley is mostly for her own benefit, made even worse by the fact that she knows how hard it would be on Teren. I like the story a lot, but I'm ranting because I expected more from Emma. :)
4/24/2010 c19 ivy
hey! i'm normaly just a silent reader but after reading your story i just had to drop you a line since i enjoyed reading it so much... so that's it. cheers
hey! i'm normaly just a silent reader but after reading your story i just had to drop you a line since i enjoyed reading it so much... so that's it. cheers
4/21/2010 c19 JoeDenim
I liked this story because it wasn't so focused on the two coming together, but the after part- the continuing of the relationship. there was some real good character development through the story, and interesting multidimensional characters. The concept is great, and the writing is done well. I'm excited for the sequel
I liked this story because it wasn't so focused on the two coming together, but the after part- the continuing of the relationship. there was some real good character development through the story, and interesting multidimensional characters. The concept is great, and the writing is done well. I'm excited for the sequel
4/20/2010 c19 mishe
another great story. wow. you've really got talent. i only read it once it was complete so no waiting for updates ... dnt think i would have made it through waiting periods sane though. this was really good ... like slightly cliched with a twist good.
congrats ... keep writing cos i wanna keep reading:D
another great story. wow. you've really got talent. i only read it once it was complete so no waiting for updates ... dnt think i would have made it through waiting periods sane though. this was really good ... like slightly cliched with a twist good.
congrats ... keep writing cos i wanna keep reading:D
3/31/2010 c1 ManlyKitty
Wait, if Tristan doesn't have a heratbeat, how can they still sleep with each other when males needs blood to ... you know.
Awesome story by the way.
Wait, if Tristan doesn't have a heratbeat, how can they still sleep with each other when males needs blood to ... you know.
Awesome story by the way.
3/22/2010 c19 fuwafuwafuwari
Wow! Just WOW! I started reading this story yesterday and I sure as heck didn't expect it to evolve like that! It was so bubbly and funny and chick-flick'y in the first chapters but you sure ran with it! The development of this story is just plain amazing! How you managed to turn this from what I mentioned into a darker, more serious...even a bit horror-like...story is beyond me! It was SUPER and I LOVED IT! I'll be sure to check out the sequel once it comes out! :)
Thank you so much for posting this gem of yours!
Wow! Just WOW! I started reading this story yesterday and I sure as heck didn't expect it to evolve like that! It was so bubbly and funny and chick-flick'y in the first chapters but you sure ran with it! The development of this story is just plain amazing! How you managed to turn this from what I mentioned into a darker, more serious...even a bit horror-like...story is beyond me! It was SUPER and I LOVED IT! I'll be sure to check out the sequel once it comes out! :)
Thank you so much for posting this gem of yours!
3/20/2010 c19 Poptart Guava King
Oh my gosh. I'm not even sure what to write in this review. I mean, this was such an epic...win. Any thoughts going through my head right now don't make sense so I'll keep it simple. I loved it, I went all ridiculously happy about the twins. And the sequel...:D
*happy dance*
Oh my gosh. I'm not even sure what to write in this review. I mean, this was such an epic...win. Any thoughts going through my head right now don't make sense so I'll keep it simple. I loved it, I went all ridiculously happy about the twins. And the sequel...:D
*happy dance*
3/13/2010 c19 gem1990
Wow. I loved it! I totally wasn't expecting the whole vamp hunter thing but I loved it when she came through and killed him for Teren.
This is a great story. You really should write books to sell. I'd buy this one thats for sure!
Great job!
Wow. I loved it! I totally wasn't expecting the whole vamp hunter thing but I loved it when she came through and killed him for Teren.
This is a great story. You really should write books to sell. I'd buy this one thats for sure!
Great job!