for Conversion12/10/2009 c19 TheRoaringHush
aw, can't belieive it's over. Great job though! can't wait to see more awesome writing from you. :)
aw, can't belieive it's over. Great job though! can't wait to see more awesome writing from you. :)
12/10/2009 c19 
2akaCHEEKS
haha he doesn't do anything halfway. jesus. one kid would already have been a miracle. but two? goodness!
2akaCHEEKShaha he doesn't do anything halfway. jesus. one kid would already have been a miracle. but two? goodness!
12/10/2009 c19 5charliej
Wow! That was a great story and I loved how you ended it. You are a talented writer and should be extremely proud of what you've produced! Brava!
5charliejWow! That was a great story and I loved how you ended it. You are a talented writer and should be extremely proud of what you've produced! Brava!
12/6/2009 c18 KittyKatLover
Just found your story and I love it! At first I was a little annoyed with the kidnapping part but it ended up working with the plot quite nicely.
Update soon please!
Just found your story and I love it! At first I was a little annoyed with the kidnapping part but it ended up working with the plot quite nicely.
Update soon please!
12/4/2009 c18 janeanist
YES! They made it through!
Not that I doubted it...hum yeah...:p
The first paragraph was so unexpected, I nearly laughed out loud! honestly I loved it!
Especially the way the mood shifted all of a sudden, it was brilliant.
I liked that I never knew what to expect: he said her name, i was like 'yeah we're all good now', and then he refused to have a little nightcap out of the would-be Buffy and I thought 'Crap, here we go again'. Well eventually they got out of there, but you really had me unsure!
Oh and last thing, I love how Emma turns into his protector (bar through the throat...gore by the way!lol) with the little chicken! lol so cute! How much is that for him? Like a shot (of alcohol) or something! Yeah didn't think that'd help!
Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait for the next one but at the same time I don't want it to end...Yeah bittersweet I guess they call it!;)
YES! They made it through!
Not that I doubted it...hum yeah...:p
The first paragraph was so unexpected, I nearly laughed out loud! honestly I loved it!
Especially the way the mood shifted all of a sudden, it was brilliant.
I liked that I never knew what to expect: he said her name, i was like 'yeah we're all good now', and then he refused to have a little nightcap out of the would-be Buffy and I thought 'Crap, here we go again'. Well eventually they got out of there, but you really had me unsure!
Oh and last thing, I love how Emma turns into his protector (bar through the throat...gore by the way!lol) with the little chicken! lol so cute! How much is that for him? Like a shot (of alcohol) or something! Yeah didn't think that'd help!
Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait for the next one but at the same time I don't want it to end...Yeah bittersweet I guess they call it!;)
12/3/2009 c18 3Queen Of Laughs
awesome chapter!
love the direction this story is going!
cant wait for more! post asap!
:D
3Queen Of Laughsawesome chapter!
love the direction this story is going!
cant wait for more! post asap!
:D
12/3/2009 c18 TheRoaringHush
awesome job! I can't wait for the next chapter... I can't believe it's the end :( But you've done such a great job- you made a vampire story realistic and connect-able, which is an enormous feat. I take my hat off to you (isn't that a weird expression?) and can't wait for the next chapter. :)
awesome job! I can't wait for the next chapter... I can't believe it's the end :( But you've done such a great job- you made a vampire story realistic and connect-able, which is an enormous feat. I take my hat off to you (isn't that a weird expression?) and can't wait for the next chapter. :)
12/3/2009 c18 5charliej
Whew! They made it! I was worried for a minute there. Can't wait to see how you wrap this all up with a 'Happily ever after' ending!
5charliejWhew! They made it! I was worried for a minute there. Can't wait to see how you wrap this all up with a 'Happily ever after' ending!
12/3/2009 c18 2TrueBelle
aw poor teren and emma. can she seriously now not have teren's kid? that seems so unfair. :( i really hate that guy for what he did. update soon! :)
2TrueBelleaw poor teren and emma. can she seriously now not have teren's kid? that seems so unfair. :( i really hate that guy for what he did. update soon! :)
11/29/2009 c17 amelia.vilid
omg! i cannot believe this! i couldnt stop reading this once i started, and now i dont know what to think. other than you must update soon! its killing me not knowing what happens next, you must put up the next chapter i beg of you please. this story is incredible, and i must say you have a definite talent for this. keep up the great work and please update soon! =]
omg! i cannot believe this! i couldnt stop reading this once i started, and now i dont know what to think. other than you must update soon! its killing me not knowing what happens next, you must put up the next chapter i beg of you please. this story is incredible, and i must say you have a definite talent for this. keep up the great work and please update soon! =]