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11/28/2018 c1 MJ
So, it’s been a while (stating the obvious, given the update date ;)) but I figured I’d be one of those people to leave a review years later, just cause. (And maybe to beg, just a bit.) Just to let you know that you’ve put out a phenomenal story, and should this review cross your path just please know there are still people that are hopeful to see the end of Alex and Darren’s story.

I remember reading the original years ago, and to this day if anyone were to ask me favourite books on this site, this would be at the top of my list, even now unfinished. I can’t say I remember the original ending, but I’ve sure as heck enjoyed reading it up to what you this far, and I would love nothing more than to see an end, once again, to their epic story.

I know life gets hectic and I totally understand moving on from a story that you might no longer be as in touch with as when originally writing it. But I just wanted to leave this review and let you know this is still one of the most tantalizing, well written stories on this site, and should you happen to stumble across this, or ever feel like you might finish it, that you will have a loyal reader in me should I ever see that update notification flash!
4/26/2017 c21 Jolene
Biblically, the part about how God made humans perfectly is unsound in my opinion.

Psalm 139:14 (NASB)
"I will give thanks to You, for I am fearfully and wonderfully made; Wonderful are Your works, And my soul knows it very well."
He did make us in His likeness, He made us similar to Him, but He did not make us perfect; rather, fearfully and wonderful. I checked across all the translations, not once does it say "perfectly". The NASB version is said to be closest to the Hebrewic text, which is why i have cited it for your reference. This verse is a verse about how deeply loved we are, how meticulous God is and about intelligent design. :)

Thank you for writing the wonderful story! It's a classic ive reread at least 4 times. Thank you and God bless you! :)
6/1/2015 c29 Lazerkat
CONTINUE PLEASE THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER BECAUSE CAT-GIRL ROMANCE WITH FLUFF AND FOXTAILS
3/24/2015 c29 3morningstorm70
OK I've caught up to you next chapter PLEEEEASE
Very good story I don't read many hetero but this one grabbed me so please continue!
3/23/2015 c24 morningstorm70
Chapter 24
I haven't looked at the last chapter to see if it's finished. I hope it is or at least u will let know if u plan to finish.
3/19/2015 c1 morningstorm70
OK done reading chapter one to see if I want to continue. I hope that this is a finished piece. I have sooo many ongoing stories I'm reading it's a little hard to remember things while waiting for updates
Please say it's complete!
9/7/2014 c29 20Rose Charles
Need an update! Want to know what's going on next! Please!
1/30/2014 c26 Guest
I love how they are complete idiots in love with each other. It so cute and sweet. And Darren is a big protective teddy bear. Please update this story, I have read it multiple times.
1/30/2014 c5 PleaseUpdate
It was very smart to keep Alex's secret (cat ears and tail) a secret from the readers. If we are curious, it forces us to continue reading and learn more about the story before we find the answer. This allows us readers to get to know the characters a bit more before we say 'this story sounds kinda boring'.
You are a great writer and I am in love with this story. Please don't abandon this story. Update?
1/24/2014 c26 AndeeMack
Great story.

Only you've managed to do at least two things I hate in these types of stories.
One, you have two sorta side characters act like they can never do wrong and no one can be mad at them. (Catherine and Roderick) I love Rod, but Catherine is so annoying with how no one tells her no, and she knows everyone's business before anyone else, and she gets to do whatever cos she's oh so scary. Seriously, when has Alex ever been able to successfully not do something she doesn't wanna do? Sometimes not getting out of things would be fine, but every time? And it's okay because it'll do her some good and it gets her closer to Darren.

Two, you've made the main characters idiots because they like each other. Darren also gets away with forcing her to do things, but it's okay cos they're in love. And everyone in her family just excepts with no problem. And it doesn't matter that they're being partially manipulated into a relationship, cos they're so cute and they belong together. And the manipulators get to act all smug about everything and I really just wanna punch them in the ace.

Also, does Catherine have any flaws? Seriously? She gets people to do whatever she wants no problem, but that's about it with her. I don't even see how she's needed, really. She obviously doesn't care how Alex really feels unless it falls into how she thinks things should go.

And telling Darren and Terra about Ellis when she didn't even know for sure whether or not Alex was gonna tell him, that was just bitchy. If she was an antagonist and constantly told her 'best friend's' secrets, she would be absolutely hated.
12/31/2013 c29 Mewbaraue
I really suck at reviewing. First I can't find the time, then I don't know what to say and when I finally do, I don’t know how to say it. Oh well, I hope this will be useful anyway. This is for chapter 27 to 29.

First of all, the pacing and explanation feels pretty good. As the reader, I feel I understand what happens and why it happens. There has not been a point where I thought "I have no idea what just happened/why that happened", which is good.

The humour in the story is still good. There are plenty of places where I find myself laughing due to something happening or one of the characters saying something funny ("You can't break up with me if we've never dated."). And while there is plenty of humour, you also manage to convey the characters other feelings well.

Compared to the first version, more things are being told and fleshed out here. Why Georgia stops hanging on to Alex is explained well and the reader is not in doubt about why she suddenly leaves Alex alone (I’m interested in seeing if/how Georgia will be included in future chapters). Ethan is also being more fleshed out simply by explaining how he reacts to Alex and Darren being a couple. Terra’s reacting to seeing Darren and Alex together is well done too.

While small things such as how Thomas and Terra became a couple may not be all-important, it is great that you include them. They give the reader some interesting information about the characters, and it is another small loose end that’s being tied up.

As for the bad things, there is not a lot to say. I have read the story multiple times, and can’t really find any inconsistencies or mistakes with regards to the story, so you’re doing a great job so far.

However, there are still some spelling errors here and there. It’s no more than a couple of places per chapter and is not important to fix right away. Apart from the spelling mistakes, there is one place where it seems words have gone missing. In chapter 27, it says "Hopefully Roderick knew what he was glanced over to where Roderick was getting a bagged peanut butter and jelly sandwich." You might want to fix that, at some point.

I guess that’s enough rambling for now. I hope something in this review is useful. If you want my opinion on something (or want me to elaborate on some of my ramblings), send me a message.

Good luck with your work (and life in general) in the new year!
12/21/2013 c29 1sadhetalian
At first I was sad because Alex and Darren couldn't be gay. I looooove gay guys. Not romantically, but they're so God damn adorable. But then you're all like, oh hey, guess what. RoderickTobiasLove And I was so happy I did an Alex victory dance. And, I hate to let out my inner Alex, but I swear if you don't update this story I will murder you in your sleep with a dull spoon. That's worse than a dull butter knife. Far worse. AND IT'S A RUSTY SPOON, TOO.
12/1/2013 c29 BOONIK
I love this story! I read it all in about a day and a half, but when I finished, I just feel like there should be more..I hope this review pushes you to continue and write more to this story...It just doesn't feel complete:(
9/8/2013 c29 4Princess Wanderer
more!
9/7/2013 c5 Princess Wanderer
the whole tail and cat ear thing should of been introduced several chapters ago
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