for I use to smile, you use to laugh9/14/2009 c1 
46kyox88
indeed a very good poem.. i really could feel your emotion running through every line...every lines rhyme nicely, and taht made this poems sound sadder...loving this...
46kyox88indeed a very good poem.. i really could feel your emotion running through every line...every lines rhyme nicely, and taht made this poems sound sadder...loving this...
9/14/2009 c1 81thursdays and rain
this ended with a question.. i like it ;) and i also like how you portrayed conflicting feelings in your poem.. keep writing!
81thursdays and rainthis ended with a question.. i like it ;) and i also like how you portrayed conflicting feelings in your poem.. keep writing!