
9/20/2009 c2
6Aminde
Yay! i was mentioned! yaywoowooyayyaywo! *ahem* anyway. yes well i enjoyed this chapter and please add more. that is all.

Yay! i was mentioned! yaywoowooyayyaywo! *ahem* anyway. yes well i enjoyed this chapter and please add more. that is all.
9/18/2009 c1 bonghi
I loove were stories but there are so few of them. I am very curious where this one is going. Can't wait for the update, please don't make us wait too long.
I loove were stories but there are so few of them. I am very curious where this one is going. Can't wait for the update, please don't make us wait too long.
9/16/2009 c1 Aminde
dude i love this story. its so hilarious. you definitely need to write more with this story. please
dude i love this story. its so hilarious. you definitely need to write more with this story. please
9/14/2009 c1 myheartisyours
i like the language he uses. tis hot. he seems a bit to ... i dont know how to put it, grungy and mean in a not alpha way? whats with that? im looking forward to the next chapter :D
i like the language he uses. tis hot. he seems a bit to ... i dont know how to put it, grungy and mean in a not alpha way? whats with that? im looking forward to the next chapter :D
9/14/2009 c1 romanceaddict
intriguing first chapter
intriguing first chapter