for Thunder Is Only a Sound4/8/2010 c1 
26Wren's Diatribe
love the end rhyme. its the biggest part of the poem but it doesnt smack me over the head every time. very nice, love.
26Wren's Diatribelove the end rhyme. its the biggest part of the poem but it doesnt smack me over the head every time. very nice, love.
9/27/2009 c1 19Eternal Skies
liked that, a witty poem. you don't see that often. like your other poems, this was an enjoyable read(can i say that? this only had 4 lines o_o)
god job, dude
19Eternal Skiesliked that, a witty poem. you don't see that often. like your other poems, this was an enjoyable read(can i say that? this only had 4 lines o_o)
god job, dude