for It's not all Mary Poppins12/29/2022 c8 SeaOfFire
Hey. It’s been more than a decade since you last updated…hell,in 3 days it’ll be 2023.I hope you’re doing ok, that you’re not dead or something. How’d composing that resignation letter go? Not sure you’ll still remember it, or this story now though…
Either way,I just wanted to let you know I love this story.. wish it had gotten further, but I’m glad they at least made up.
Hey. It’s been more than a decade since you last updated…hell,in 3 days it’ll be 2023.I hope you’re doing ok, that you’re not dead or something. How’d composing that resignation letter go? Not sure you’ll still remember it, or this story now though…
Either way,I just wanted to let you know I love this story.. wish it had gotten further, but I’m glad they at least made up.
2/15/2018 c8 TheLastRomantic
Please oh please update! Please people are still reading and we need and ending to this story! Does Dominic ever make a more or not? Please update please
Please oh please update! Please people are still reading and we need and ending to this story! Does Dominic ever make a more or not? Please update please
6/11/2017 c8 
4ImmanenceEnsured
I think it's brilliant that you show Leland's dillemma. When you give some people a finger, they take an arm, and with rich people it's worse; they believe that because they throw money at you, you're supposed to give everything, always. It's a scary situation to find yourself in.
I think this story's strong point is plot and characterisation. Every chapter is surprising and interesting. There are mixed up tenses here and there, some strange details (like why does Leland have to clean the house when a filthy rich guy can just hire a cleaning lady, or why would a school 'not want the parents to help their children with homework'?) and Elise doesn't always talk like a kid her age, but those are minor gripes. Overall this is great. I also love how organic Dominic's character feels. His sudden outburst in chapter seven didn't feel forced to me. We know he's a workaholic a rich lawyer and demanding. It's completely in character. But then again he's not a bad guy, and his sincere apologies are heartfelt. Terrific writing. Sad this is discontinued!
4ImmanenceEnsuredI think it's brilliant that you show Leland's dillemma. When you give some people a finger, they take an arm, and with rich people it's worse; they believe that because they throw money at you, you're supposed to give everything, always. It's a scary situation to find yourself in.
I think this story's strong point is plot and characterisation. Every chapter is surprising and interesting. There are mixed up tenses here and there, some strange details (like why does Leland have to clean the house when a filthy rich guy can just hire a cleaning lady, or why would a school 'not want the parents to help their children with homework'?) and Elise doesn't always talk like a kid her age, but those are minor gripes. Overall this is great. I also love how organic Dominic's character feels. His sudden outburst in chapter seven didn't feel forced to me. We know he's a workaholic a rich lawyer and demanding. It's completely in character. But then again he's not a bad guy, and his sincere apologies are heartfelt. Terrific writing. Sad this is discontinued!
6/11/2017 c1 ImmanenceEnsured
This is an absolutely brilliant first chapter, tone and character perfectly set. Great writing!
This is an absolutely brilliant first chapter, tone and character perfectly set. Great writing!
10/4/2016 c8 1thoughshaltnotkill
Oh how it really pains me to realize that this story may never be pursued again. It really is such a shame especially now that I have become so attached to the characters you created. Regardless, now matter what decisions you have come upon I'll be sure to support them. For this wondrous story you have given birth, only a delightful gratitude I can compensate.
Regards
1thoughshaltnotkillOh how it really pains me to realize that this story may never be pursued again. It really is such a shame especially now that I have become so attached to the characters you created. Regardless, now matter what decisions you have come upon I'll be sure to support them. For this wondrous story you have given birth, only a delightful gratitude I can compensate.
Regards
5/13/2016 c8 Guest
please, can't you update? I know you left the story for quite some time, but it's realy interesting. so an update would be absolutly awesome. please
please, can't you update? I know you left the story for quite some time, but it's realy interesting. so an update would be absolutly awesome. please
3/8/2016 c8 PeterThePan
Are you lost in Neverland? Seriously its sad when amazing stories with 20k words have about 500 reviews and are left INCOMPLETE. You build these awesome characters and then you leave them hanging. Its unfair. You should try to get back to this. This story is mind blowing. Loved it. I want so much to see it progress and see the characters develop more. Damn it Girl. Or Boy. Whoever you are. I am now gonna go and check if you have any other stories. Also gonna read your bio. Keep writing and please try to get back to this.
ITS NEVER TOO LATE YA HEAR ME?
Are you lost in Neverland? Seriously its sad when amazing stories with 20k words have about 500 reviews and are left INCOMPLETE. You build these awesome characters and then you leave them hanging. Its unfair. You should try to get back to this. This story is mind blowing. Loved it. I want so much to see it progress and see the characters develop more. Damn it Girl. Or Boy. Whoever you are. I am now gonna go and check if you have any other stories. Also gonna read your bio. Keep writing and please try to get back to this.
ITS NEVER TOO LATE YA HEAR ME?
11/22/2015 c8 5Blueyes57
its been a VERY long time that you've abandoned this story. thats a shame. it was very good in my opinion and had an excellent chance of becoming something when finished.
too bad
5Blueyes57its been a VERY long time that you've abandoned this story. thats a shame. it was very good in my opinion and had an excellent chance of becoming something when finished.
too bad
6/21/2015 c8 10writerkid101
Please update soon. This is such a good story and I want to see how this all turns out.
10writerkid101Please update soon. This is such a good story and I want to see how this all turns out.
6/1/2015 c8 reya
more pleaseeeeee
more pleaseeeeee
5/26/2015 c8 chocovic-chu
Aww, this story is so cute and has potensial! Too bad there wouldn't any following chapters yet . . .
Thanks for sharing! I enjoy it very much even though it's unfinished.
Aww, this story is so cute and has potensial! Too bad there wouldn't any following chapters yet . . .
Thanks for sharing! I enjoy it very much even though it's unfinished.