for edith are we not9/16/2012 c1 
105qubed
I love leonard cohen, that man's singing is my favorite lullaby. I also love this poem, and the repetition of edith having said she wasn't a poet. I like how edith shifts from a person to an object in my perception. I love this line:
"that in her chest is an ugly sweater wrapped around a chestnut,"
You're good at this, keep it up. You inspired me.
105qubedI love leonard cohen, that man's singing is my favorite lullaby. I also love this poem, and the repetition of edith having said she wasn't a poet. I like how edith shifts from a person to an object in my perception. I love this line:
"that in her chest is an ugly sweater wrapped around a chestnut,"
You're good at this, keep it up. You inspired me.
7/10/2010 c1 144chaos called creation
...and now I love the name Edith.
Great tone in this, very caustic.
Keep writing!
144chaos called creation...and now I love the name Edith.
Great tone in this, very caustic.
Keep writing!
10/7/2009 c1 she smolders
The people you write about in your poetry always feel so real to me after I read it, like I want to know them or maybe I want to be them.
And Leonard Cohen is always a great form of inspiration. :)
The people you write about in your poetry always feel so real to me after I read it, like I want to know them or maybe I want to be them.
And Leonard Cohen is always a great form of inspiration. :)
9/29/2009 c1 kat.tastropheexhotmail.com
"edith believes in strange summers and ugly sweaters and rich wars raged within your own ribs."
this is my favorite line in the whole piece, especially about the "rich wars raged within your own ribs". spectacular writing; i loved it.
k.X
"edith believes in strange summers and ugly sweaters and rich wars raged within your own ribs."
this is my favorite line in the whole piece, especially about the "rich wars raged within your own ribs". spectacular writing; i loved it.
k.X
9/25/2009 c1 989East-0f-Eden
I loved all the bits you stuck into this "tannic acid" and alphapet to find a rhyme" very unique!
989East-0f-EdenI loved all the bits you stuck into this "tannic acid" and alphapet to find a rhyme" very unique!
9/25/2009 c1 Isca
"Edith, we are not." Oh wow. I don't know what it is about this line, but there's something deeply moving and profound about it-as if the words 'we are not' pertain to sorrow or death. I love this line. :)
"I can see you starting to whither." I like that the speaker compares Edith to a flower.
"Now you're rotting." Brilliant ending!
"Edith, we are not." Oh wow. I don't know what it is about this line, but there's something deeply moving and profound about it-as if the words 'we are not' pertain to sorrow or death. I love this line. :)
"I can see you starting to whither." I like that the speaker compares Edith to a flower.
"Now you're rotting." Brilliant ending!