for Library Boy9/27/2015 c1 Blue-Eyed Adonis
Awwww I loved this! I liked how in the beginning Ethan was Just Another Cliche but then *le gasp* he's a frat boy! Jenna's supersweet, but that tampon thing cracked me up...if that happened to me I think I'd just get myself a hole to die in :D
Awwww I loved this! I liked how in the beginning Ethan was Just Another Cliche but then *le gasp* he's a frat boy! Jenna's supersweet, but that tampon thing cracked me up...if that happened to me I think I'd just get myself a hole to die in :D
1/23/2010 c1 
6letyoursoultakeflight
Jenna did not consider herself a stalker. It was not as though she spent her whole time gawking at the boy at the desk,
- loved that bit =] smiles from ear to ear!
And I loved the gun bit!
And I like the way you wrote and structured this too- nicely done =]
“Let me rephrase: I don’t drink.”
- Jenna, I dmire your ability to just say that!
“God, I can’t wait to see Richard Armitrage in North and South again.”
- Okay, s now you have me needing to see that again...
Love the ending =]
6letyoursoultakeflightJenna did not consider herself a stalker. It was not as though she spent her whole time gawking at the boy at the desk,
- loved that bit =] smiles from ear to ear!
And I loved the gun bit!
And I like the way you wrote and structured this too- nicely done =]
“Let me rephrase: I don’t drink.”
- Jenna, I dmire your ability to just say that!
“God, I can’t wait to see Richard Armitrage in North and South again.”
- Okay, s now you have me needing to see that again...
Love the ending =]
12/28/2009 c1 10CassandraStacy
I really like this story. I think because it has an air of realism to it. Ethan isn't a perfect character . . . and he's not the Prince Charming that Jenna imagined him to be, but that's just the realism of life. Oh goodness, people who say first impressions are always right . . . ^_^. I like that this story was left with the air of question. I think it's a good ending point. It's hard saying whether or not things would work out between Ethan and Jenna, but I think it's nice that she's willing to give it a try; so long as she also remembers that there are two sides to him. Thanks so much for sharing this story!
Cassandra
10CassandraStacyI really like this story. I think because it has an air of realism to it. Ethan isn't a perfect character . . . and he's not the Prince Charming that Jenna imagined him to be, but that's just the realism of life. Oh goodness, people who say first impressions are always right . . . ^_^. I like that this story was left with the air of question. I think it's a good ending point. It's hard saying whether or not things would work out between Ethan and Jenna, but I think it's nice that she's willing to give it a try; so long as she also remembers that there are two sides to him. Thanks so much for sharing this story!
Cassandra
12/16/2009 c1 A.O.Y.U
Honestly, I think this story deserves far more reviews than it has received. Of course, I may be somewhat biased because Jenna reminds me a lot of myself, and I can therefore relate very well to her. :)
I think you are a wonderful writer. You express yourself well, and gave your protagonist a very clear voice. Despite this being a one-shot, you fleshed out all of the different characters exceedingly well, and gave the story a sense of realism - probably because you did what most authors are encouraged to do, and that is to write about what you know. I really liked that you portrayed a different side of college life than the normal party-happy alcohol-worshipping atmosphere that is often portrayed in such stories. I really liked that Jenna didn't drink, despite being encouraged to do so by a guy she liked. It was refreshing to read about a woman who knew her own mind. I like that you showed Ethan had flaws, to which he was willing to admit. I like that you were able to show how both had a different lifestyle, but were able to come to a form of compromise (at least based on what we've seen of their relationship). If I keep going on about what I liked, it'll probably get a little tedious to read. Let's suffice it to say that I thought this piece was excellent, and I think you deserve a great deal of praise for your work. :)
Honestly, I think this story deserves far more reviews than it has received. Of course, I may be somewhat biased because Jenna reminds me a lot of myself, and I can therefore relate very well to her. :)
I think you are a wonderful writer. You express yourself well, and gave your protagonist a very clear voice. Despite this being a one-shot, you fleshed out all of the different characters exceedingly well, and gave the story a sense of realism - probably because you did what most authors are encouraged to do, and that is to write about what you know. I really liked that you portrayed a different side of college life than the normal party-happy alcohol-worshipping atmosphere that is often portrayed in such stories. I really liked that Jenna didn't drink, despite being encouraged to do so by a guy she liked. It was refreshing to read about a woman who knew her own mind. I like that you showed Ethan had flaws, to which he was willing to admit. I like that you were able to show how both had a different lifestyle, but were able to come to a form of compromise (at least based on what we've seen of their relationship). If I keep going on about what I liked, it'll probably get a little tedious to read. Let's suffice it to say that I thought this piece was excellent, and I think you deserve a great deal of praise for your work. :)
9/22/2009 c1 5I Can Breathe
It's a really good story. I liked how he has sort of two types of personalities, maybe you should play with that/
5I Can BreatheIt's a really good story. I liked how he has sort of two types of personalities, maybe you should play with that/
9/22/2009 c1 2Fading.Ink
WOW. It feels like you wrote about me!
I'm exactly like Jenna! hahaa.
anyways! it was an awesome story, really sweet:)
great job !
2Fading.InkWOW. It feels like you wrote about me!
I'm exactly like Jenna! hahaa.
anyways! it was an awesome story, really sweet:)
great job !
9/22/2009 c1 12Miss Mysteries
Interesting one-shot. It was good how you seperated the different sections and it had a good storyline to it.
12Miss MysteriesInteresting one-shot. It was good how you seperated the different sections and it had a good storyline to it.