for Losing Myself in You5/2/2010 c31 Johana79
this story was amazing. it shows that opposites do attract and you should never judge a book by its cover.
this story was amazing. it shows that opposites do attract and you should never judge a book by its cover.
4/22/2010 c31 
1perfectlyxximperfect
hey :) really enjoyed your story. i'm totally a sucker for these supernatural crap. some people make stories that are too much, but this was amazing. i hope you continue writing cause you really have a talent for it :D
btw, what happened to kendall? i was kinda expecting her to be at the wedding or something.haha :))
1perfectlyxximperfecthey :) really enjoyed your story. i'm totally a sucker for these supernatural crap. some people make stories that are too much, but this was amazing. i hope you continue writing cause you really have a talent for it :D
btw, what happened to kendall? i was kinda expecting her to be at the wedding or something.haha :))
4/19/2010 c1 FateAndCry
I just have to say that I LOVE you. I've read just about all of your stories and I haven't found one that I don't like. Just wanted to say something, and keep on writing!
I just have to say that I LOVE you. I've read just about all of your stories and I haven't found one that I don't like. Just wanted to say something, and keep on writing!
4/18/2010 c11 HeArT-bRoKeN-CB Lover xD
I haven't read the whole story yet but I just wanted to quickly review and say that I know where you got the last part of Chapter Eleven. = ] I'm going to continue to read now and review at the end of the story = ]
I haven't read the whole story yet but I just wanted to quickly review and say that I know where you got the last part of Chapter Eleven. = ] I'm going to continue to read now and review at the end of the story = ]
4/16/2010 c3 JJKim
Ok so if alphas mate with wolves, would that be considered beastiality? Oh and if a human and a wolf, no matter how strange the idea, have sex then would their children be werewolves?
Ok so if alphas mate with wolves, would that be considered beastiality? Oh and if a human and a wolf, no matter how strange the idea, have sex then would their children be werewolves?
4/12/2010 c31 4TwilightStarss
*clap clap clap* wonderful!Another great story! I love the ending...so cute!
4TwilightStarss*clap clap clap* wonderful!Another great story! I love the ending...so cute!
4/11/2010 c31 animegirl214
aw~ Together forever~ :)
thanks so much for this completed story! :)
so we know what happens with her friendship with Clive.. but wat about Kendall? she basically diappeared! lol
aw~ Together forever~ :)
thanks so much for this completed story! :)
so we know what happens with her friendship with Clive.. but wat about Kendall? she basically diappeared! lol
4/6/2010 c31 xjo orange
I'm glad to have come across your story; It was interesting and very enjoyable. I definitely liked the interactions between Logan and Bridgette!
I'm glad to have come across your story; It was interesting and very enjoyable. I definitely liked the interactions between Logan and Bridgette!
4/4/2010 c1 lexi00
so your story was good and you write well too, butbit needed more development and more action. the whole time I was reading about the ceremony I was expecting NDS to come inthere at any moment and do something because surely they wouldn't let a former agent MARRY the person who has just bee slated for death. and her relationship wig Kendal? you would figure Bridgette would want her only friend at her only wedding. just saying that it needed more life to it, more umph, you know? especially since it is a werewolf story, they always have alot of family and warmth stuff like that.
so your story was good and you write well too, butbit needed more development and more action. the whole time I was reading about the ceremony I was expecting NDS to come inthere at any moment and do something because surely they wouldn't let a former agent MARRY the person who has just bee slated for death. and her relationship wig Kendal? you would figure Bridgette would want her only friend at her only wedding. just saying that it needed more life to it, more umph, you know? especially since it is a werewolf story, they always have alot of family and warmth stuff like that.
4/4/2010 c26 Tamika
wicked story :).
wicked story :).
3/18/2010 c31 Genato
Well... what can I say? This is probably one of the most cliched wolf fics there is. I have mixed feelings about this... At one point, I admit that you write really well, like the details are sufficient and there are only a few grammatical errors but I don't know... the pacing is too fast. She fell in love too quickly, in my opinion. Events happened too abruptly and it focused too much on Logan and Bridgette? I would've preferred it if other characters had more important roles and their personalities developed, including the main characters'. There were also loose ends? Like what about the friendship between Kendall and Bridgette? ANd maybe the animosity between the two Black brothers could've been more elaborated. And maybe Logan should've hesitated more... about his brother? I mean, strong love is supposedly present in wolf pack but what's the turning point? LIke i know that it was Logan appointment as Alpha male but is that all? Also, there were only a few mentions about the whole wolf pack. Like, who's the Beta? or wtvr...
But I can see your potential as a writer... but maybe you could think more add-ons beyond the main plot, to make it richer... and better?
Well... what can I say? This is probably one of the most cliched wolf fics there is. I have mixed feelings about this... At one point, I admit that you write really well, like the details are sufficient and there are only a few grammatical errors but I don't know... the pacing is too fast. She fell in love too quickly, in my opinion. Events happened too abruptly and it focused too much on Logan and Bridgette? I would've preferred it if other characters had more important roles and their personalities developed, including the main characters'. There were also loose ends? Like what about the friendship between Kendall and Bridgette? ANd maybe the animosity between the two Black brothers could've been more elaborated. And maybe Logan should've hesitated more... about his brother? I mean, strong love is supposedly present in wolf pack but what's the turning point? LIke i know that it was Logan appointment as Alpha male but is that all? Also, there were only a few mentions about the whole wolf pack. Like, who's the Beta? or wtvr...
But I can see your potential as a writer... but maybe you could think more add-ons beyond the main plot, to make it richer... and better?