for Losing Myself in You3/11/2013 c30 Btwn-the-lines
I feel like they kicked a bunch of people out of the pack,and I kinda wish his brother would have played a bigger role .. But this was good nonetheless
I feel like they kicked a bunch of people out of the pack,and I kinda wish his brother would have played a bigger role .. But this was good nonetheless
2/21/2013 c30 Guest
I think that's stupid. Doesn't she realize that if she could change that Clive too could eventually change his opinion. She just lost a friend, and its all her fault. Some friends might be judgmental, but it also seemed like Clive just wanted what's best for her, and in someone else's view, it could very well seem that her judgement was clouded with her sudden decision. She's too narrow minded and doesn't recognize a friend.
I think that's stupid. Doesn't she realize that if she could change that Clive too could eventually change his opinion. She just lost a friend, and its all her fault. Some friends might be judgmental, but it also seemed like Clive just wanted what's best for her, and in someone else's view, it could very well seem that her judgement was clouded with her sudden decision. She's too narrow minded and doesn't recognize a friend.
2/21/2013 c29 Guest
Ha! That sounded distinctly like Scar in the Lion King when she told Julianne to run. Cool story.
Ha! That sounded distinctly like Scar in the Lion King when she told Julianne to run. Cool story.
9/29/2012 c11 
4F.H.W
Hey I just realised Bridgette's refusal to eat and Logan's 'then you will starve' reply is similar to that of the Beauty and the Beast movie?:)
4F.H.WHey I just realised Bridgette's refusal to eat and Logan's 'then you will starve' reply is similar to that of the Beauty and the Beast movie?:)
9/5/2012 c5 Guest
Sassy
Sassy
9/5/2012 c1 3
Really excellent.
Really excellent.
8/25/2012 c31 Guest
This was so beautiful . I really admire your work . ((: keep on writing . You're brilliant .
Btw: your other stories are bloody brilliant too :D
This was so beautiful . I really admire your work . ((: keep on writing . You're brilliant .
Btw: your other stories are bloody brilliant too :D
8/25/2012 c32 Luce17
Amazing! :)
Amazing! :)
7/28/2012 c31 Guest
The story was good, specially in the beginning because of the intense feelings and the detailed descriptions. However, at the end the story seemed rushed and it wasn't as strongly captivating, which resulted to be a bit hard to be in depth with the story-line. But you still got me hooked and finish it, so I would say it was a good story but with a few minor adjustment, more elaboration and slower pace, it would be a brilliant. :)
The story was good, specially in the beginning because of the intense feelings and the detailed descriptions. However, at the end the story seemed rushed and it wasn't as strongly captivating, which resulted to be a bit hard to be in depth with the story-line. But you still got me hooked and finish it, so I would say it was a good story but with a few minor adjustment, more elaboration and slower pace, it would be a brilliant. :)
7/25/2012 c32 Tammy Rae
The book was good. It had a very strong beginning but I feel like you rushed the ending a bit. It might be good to split the book into two so that you can fully develop the story.
Also there were parts where it felt too much like Beauty and the Beast. Specifically when he says, "If you won't eat with me, then you won't eat at all. You can starve for all I care." That is straight out of the movie. You might want to rewrite this so that it is less plagiarism and more your story.
Pretty good book but still needs some tweaks to be great.
The book was good. It had a very strong beginning but I feel like you rushed the ending a bit. It might be good to split the book into two so that you can fully develop the story.
Also there were parts where it felt too much like Beauty and the Beast. Specifically when he says, "If you won't eat with me, then you won't eat at all. You can starve for all I care." That is straight out of the movie. You might want to rewrite this so that it is less plagiarism and more your story.
Pretty good book but still needs some tweaks to be great.