for Ode to Peter Pan2/24/2011 c1 
5tickle.me.blue32
Whoa. This was amazing ^^. I really can't find a better word to describe what I'm feeling.
This is something I can definitely relate to. I don't want to grow up either. Actually, I'm terrified sometimes of that happening and maybe that's one of the reasons why I liked this so much.
"and i am still a child,
clapping her hands, wishing for peter pan" - now, that took my breath away. Just wonderful.
5tickle.me.blue32Whoa. This was amazing ^^. I really can't find a better word to describe what I'm feeling.
This is something I can definitely relate to. I don't want to grow up either. Actually, I'm terrified sometimes of that happening and maybe that's one of the reasons why I liked this so much.
"and i am still a child,
clapping her hands, wishing for peter pan" - now, that took my breath away. Just wonderful.
7/16/2010 c1 23Snazzilicious
I love me some Peter Pan references. There was no specifc part that I admired most, because all of this is absolutely beautiful. Mygod...You're amazing. All creepy-ness unintended.
23SnazziliciousI love me some Peter Pan references. There was no specifc part that I admired most, because all of this is absolutely beautiful. Mygod...You're amazing. All creepy-ness unintended.
3/16/2010 c1 81thursdays and rain
this is brilliant and beautiful. gorgeous gorgeous imagery. definitely adding this poem on my faves.
81thursdays and rainthis is brilliant and beautiful. gorgeous gorgeous imagery. definitely adding this poem on my faves.
3/14/2010 c1 goodbye-revolution
This is gorgeous.
Peter Pan was always my favourite as a kid.
And I have to admit - I still kinda wish he was real.
But I guess, in some ways he really is.
There's just a little piece of him inside every boy..
Anyway, enough of my ramblings.
This is beautiful, and I adore it :)
This is gorgeous.
Peter Pan was always my favourite as a kid.
And I have to admit - I still kinda wish he was real.
But I guess, in some ways he really is.
There's just a little piece of him inside every boy..
Anyway, enough of my ramblings.
This is beautiful, and I adore it :)
2/21/2010 c1 3the milk bottle
This was truly beautiful.
I've always been fascinated with Peter Pan - when I was a kid, I loved him because he seemed so fun, but now that I'm in university and a lot older, whenever I think of Peter Pan, I'm filled with nostalgia, thinking about the times in my old home where we had a large yard where my neighbors and my sisters and I played and we made up our own language. Those were the days.
Great poem. It was like reading a fairytale, a fantasy world, and I felt like I was drifting along in colors and emotions and I felt a pang of disappointment when it was over because it meant I had to get back to reality and all the projects I have to do.
But I have to say, this poem inspired me. :)
3the milk bottleThis was truly beautiful.
I've always been fascinated with Peter Pan - when I was a kid, I loved him because he seemed so fun, but now that I'm in university and a lot older, whenever I think of Peter Pan, I'm filled with nostalgia, thinking about the times in my old home where we had a large yard where my neighbors and my sisters and I played and we made up our own language. Those were the days.
Great poem. It was like reading a fairytale, a fantasy world, and I felt like I was drifting along in colors and emotions and I felt a pang of disappointment when it was over because it meant I had to get back to reality and all the projects I have to do.
But I have to say, this poem inspired me. :)
1/24/2010 c1 32moving in stillness
I.Love.It.
This is just plain amazing.
Sorry if I sound like a babbling twelve-year-old eating ice cream - I act like one when I like something. A lot.
Breathtaking poem.
It sort of made me wish I didn't rush in growing up.
32moving in stillnessI.Love.It.
This is just plain amazing.
Sorry if I sound like a babbling twelve-year-old eating ice cream - I act like one when I like something. A lot.
Breathtaking poem.
It sort of made me wish I didn't rush in growing up.
12/29/2009 c1 173Little girl Big world
I do LOVE this piece & the whole concept behind it :)
The formatting I feel could be toned down a bit, other
than that just wonderful work. Well written. I enjoyed!
173Little girl Big worldI do LOVE this piece & the whole concept behind it :)
The formatting I feel could be toned down a bit, other
than that just wonderful work. Well written. I enjoyed!
11/20/2009 c1 9MagicWords
This was an absolutely fantastic piece of work. I loved it. It had all the right touches! I love Peter Pan, too, so it stuck to me very fast. Keep it up!
MagicWords
9MagicWordsThis was an absolutely fantastic piece of work. I loved it. It had all the right touches! I love Peter Pan, too, so it stuck to me very fast. Keep it up!
MagicWords
11/15/2009 c1 132Erica Jo
this is ultra amazing! i can see peter pan through new eyes and you kinda made me fall in love with him too ;) but i love this great job!
132Erica Jothis is ultra amazing! i can see peter pan through new eyes and you kinda made me fall in love with him too ;) but i love this great job!
11/8/2009 c1 7J.Sal
aww..wow! this poem was beautiful. brings back memories of childhood. i love your writing style.Great work! =)
7J.Salaww..wow! this poem was beautiful. brings back memories of childhood. i love your writing style.Great work! =)
10/4/2009 c1 14Renana
Your wording is so beautiful :) Peter Pan is such a wonderful story, because of it's imagery, most things based on it are amazing, like your poem
14RenanaYour wording is so beautiful :) Peter Pan is such a wonderful story, because of it's imagery, most things based on it are amazing, like your poem
9/23/2009 c1 2Adis Crow
This is one of the best poems I've read on FP lately. Usually I'm not a big fan of underlining and italics and things in poems, but you used them to such amazing effect I was totally blown over. I also adore how it wavers between the vivid imagery of the original Peter Pan and the coldness of a sudden suggestion of reality (back pressed against cold lockers); it makes for an exhilarating half-fantasy that's more heart-breakingly real than either side of the looking glass alone could ever be.
This, in short, is truly incredible. You have my admiration.
Osprey
2Adis CrowThis is one of the best poems I've read on FP lately. Usually I'm not a big fan of underlining and italics and things in poems, but you used them to such amazing effect I was totally blown over. I also adore how it wavers between the vivid imagery of the original Peter Pan and the coldness of a sudden suggestion of reality (back pressed against cold lockers); it makes for an exhilarating half-fantasy that's more heart-breakingly real than either side of the looking glass alone could ever be.
This, in short, is truly incredible. You have my admiration.
Osprey
9/23/2009 c1 concretion.of.sugar
This poem is amazing. Definitely one of your best. "Please don't let me grow up." -very true. I loved it!
This poem is amazing. Definitely one of your best. "Please don't let me grow up." -very true. I loved it!