
1/17/2012 c9
105laura Decamara
i liked your story a lot i enjoyed reading it all the way...I wonder what will happen now...

i liked your story a lot i enjoyed reading it all the way...I wonder what will happen now...
1/8/2011 c8 Writer334
It's not that realistic, but it's really good other than that!
It's not that realistic, but it's really good other than that!
3/6/2010 c7
2Lunary Canary
"wants to use "" cause its fun!" "randomness""awesomeness" "melanie and him r lovesick fools until her status gets in the way"
"update soon!"

"wants to use "" cause its fun!" "randomness""awesomeness" "melanie and him r lovesick fools until her status gets in the way"
"update soon!"
2/18/2010 c1
102Cynthia Brent
This is great stuff! You really put us right there, into the mind of the characters! I don't think Austin should be so mad at the birds, though - not unless one of them drops a load on his face!

This is great stuff! You really put us right there, into the mind of the characters! I don't think Austin should be so mad at the birds, though - not unless one of them drops a load on his face!
1/20/2010 c5
6OneLeft
Aww...how sweet. Update soon. I wnat to know what happens between Melanie and Austin

Aww...how sweet. Update soon. I wnat to know what happens between Melanie and Austin
1/18/2010 c4
1sea of monsters
Fantastic story idea!
it could be a little less cheesy? Other then that, good job!

Fantastic story idea!
it could be a little less cheesy? Other then that, good job!