for Secrets on my Tongue9/26/2009 c1 
38kikew1
This is tragic and beautiful. I love it. I don't say that very often. Amazingly done.
38kikew1This is tragic and beautiful. I love it. I don't say that very often. Amazingly done.
9/26/2009 c1 alkfhdakjd1
I LOVE sestinas...and this one was especially amazing. Mine usually turn out rather forced ("how can I use this word at the end of a line so many times? um. -makes something stupid up-" and so on) but this one just sounded very natural, well-paced, and the subject matter was interesting. Amazing poem.
I LOVE sestinas...and this one was especially amazing. Mine usually turn out rather forced ("how can I use this word at the end of a line so many times? um. -makes something stupid up-" and so on) but this one just sounded very natural, well-paced, and the subject matter was interesting. Amazing poem.