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for Unicorn

9/29/2009 c1 4EBSmith
very nice.

I like that you only have rhyming in a couple of places, it works well in this poem.

And the repetition of the last line is really nice.

You also use very beautiful language, eg 'silent vigil', I like the way that it shows the grace of the unicorn, but also presents it as powerful, like it's standing guard over the land as the most majestic creature of all that is admired by the land itself :)

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