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12/24/2010 c1 27hide your eyes
i quite liked this.
10/2/2009 c1 14kit feral
I hope you know I love this.

especially the last stanza.
9/26/2009 c1 16Raguelle
Beautiful description of God. He is love, peace, joy, life... He's a mystery, though we were made in His image and likeness, we have no way of knowing how to picture Him. So He's different for everyone. It troubles me when people insist that is something other that Love in it's entirety, because that "sitting up in the sky" image is really something that's cost lives. Keep it up, you're really good with stream of consciousness poetry, which is like, my favorite :D
9/26/2009 c1 15hero.complex
very inspirational, at a very trying time in my life. thank you. the metaphors are magical. i believe you captured the beauty and mystery embodied in christ.

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