for The Unexpected Benefits of Bowling9/15/2019 c1 Guest
I need to bowling!
I need to bowling!
8/21/2015 c1 blazedveggies556
Oh my gosh, I love this story. I'm actually not a fan of the romance genre, but I couldn't stop reading this. I love the way you write! So fluid! And the way you personify the objects. That's genius! Fantastic job! :D
Oh my gosh, I love this story. I'm actually not a fan of the romance genre, but I couldn't stop reading this. I love the way you write! So fluid! And the way you personify the objects. That's genius! Fantastic job! :D
5/20/2013 c1 redcristal
Definitely worth posting :)
I love cute oneshots like this. Absolutely wonderful the way the boy doesn't appear till the end. I love it!
Definitely worth posting :)
I love cute oneshots like this. Absolutely wonderful the way the boy doesn't appear till the end. I love it!
4/18/2013 c1 
4dizzydreamer99
I like it, it's sweet, but the pins get a bit boring after a while with repetition.
4dizzydreamer99I like it, it's sweet, but the pins get a bit boring after a while with repetition.
12/31/2012 c1 newone
this is the first time i have fell in love with the lead male character by his hands... and i kind of like it
this is the first time i have fell in love with the lead male character by his hands... and i kind of like it
9/28/2011 c1 little.artist
...so going bowling...and so going to try out this new technique of pretending the pins are people I hate :D
...so going bowling...and so going to try out this new technique of pretending the pins are people I hate :D
5/7/2011 c1 5Disney Is Hardcore
That was a really interesting format. I've always admired when authors can work in backstory through something which seems completely irrelevant. I really liked it. :)
5Disney Is HardcoreThat was a really interesting format. I've always admired when authors can work in backstory through something which seems completely irrelevant. I really liked it. :)
1/23/2011 c1 9glitterxx
Hi! First of all, I just wanted to say that you had me hooked with the concept of the story. It was smart and definitely original.
"I am woman, hear me roar." - This line had me giggling because it just really suited the character, and I loved that you didn't give out any names and let the readers use their own imagination. That being said, I think you should have given a littler bit more back story such as during the part where she was flashing back to the meeting she had in the morning. You've told me that she's angry, but I have no idea why and I did want to know how this anger had brought her to the bowling alley in the first place.
I really loved your descriptions and the frames transitions were smart and really brought the whole story together. Amazing job with the story!
-J. xx
9glitterxxHi! First of all, I just wanted to say that you had me hooked with the concept of the story. It was smart and definitely original.
"I am woman, hear me roar." - This line had me giggling because it just really suited the character, and I loved that you didn't give out any names and let the readers use their own imagination. That being said, I think you should have given a littler bit more back story such as during the part where she was flashing back to the meeting she had in the morning. You've told me that she's angry, but I have no idea why and I did want to know how this anger had brought her to the bowling alley in the first place.
I really loved your descriptions and the frames transitions were smart and really brought the whole story together. Amazing job with the story!
-J. xx
12/5/2010 c1 larafrancesca
It was worth posting! :)
It was worth posting! :)
8/9/2010 c1 SnoQueen
Hahaha! That was funny and cute! Really enjoyed reading it! Too bad it didn't go on longer - although, I don't mind the short and sweet ending.
Keep it up! (:
~SnoQueen
Hahaha! That was funny and cute! Really enjoyed reading it! Too bad it didn't go on longer - although, I don't mind the short and sweet ending.
Keep it up! (:
~SnoQueen
8/6/2010 c1 8Lethe's Oblivion
Ah, loved it! It's absolutely adorable, and I'm definitely favoriting. Looking forward to reading more from you.
8Lethe's OblivionAh, loved it! It's absolutely adorable, and I'm definitely favoriting. Looking forward to reading more from you.
7/16/2010 c1 3lost in pale blue
This is completely adorable :) I think we've all felt that kind of frustration towards bosses and coworkers.
You did an excellent job of creating the atmosphere of the bowling experience and I loved the build-up of her interaction with the pin boy. Perfect ending, too.
3lost in pale blueThis is completely adorable :) I think we've all felt that kind of frustration towards bosses and coworkers.
You did an excellent job of creating the atmosphere of the bowling experience and I loved the build-up of her interaction with the pin boy. Perfect ending, too.