for The Unexpected Benefits of Bowling9/27/2009 c1 paraNormal
cute. not too heavy on the romance, but i like it.
cute. not too heavy on the romance, but i like it.
9/27/2009 c1 MarieAnn
This was definitely worth posting. :-) I love your writing. It seems simple yet it keeps me intrigued and captures my attention!
This was definitely worth posting. :-) I love your writing. It seems simple yet it keeps me intrigued and captures my attention!
9/27/2009 c1 
1HideAndGoSeek
i was cracking up while reading this! I am definatly glad you posted it!
~*~HGS~*~
1HideAndGoSeeki was cracking up while reading this! I am definatly glad you posted it!
~*~HGS~*~
9/27/2009 c1 112AbbySomebody
Aww, this was really cute! I for one am glad you posted it. I love bowling (seriously, I'm at the alley at least 4 times a week) and you did a great job of describing what its like to bowl. I do that too, I channel all my anger at the pins.
I thought it was unique how this didn't have a lot of dialogue in it, except for the very end. You were still able to convey the 'chemistry' between the pin boy and the A.W.O. (whose name cracked me up). Very good job with this!
-Abby
112AbbySomebodyAww, this was really cute! I for one am glad you posted it. I love bowling (seriously, I'm at the alley at least 4 times a week) and you did a great job of describing what its like to bowl. I do that too, I channel all my anger at the pins.
I thought it was unique how this didn't have a lot of dialogue in it, except for the very end. You were still able to convey the 'chemistry' between the pin boy and the A.W.O. (whose name cracked me up). Very good job with this!
-Abby