4/24/2020 c1 ShioriTakahara
Lovely story. That was one hell of an idea and I loved the way you went about with the it.
If possible, I would love to see more of Jonas and Mina:)
Lovely story. That was one hell of an idea and I loved the way you went about with the it.
If possible, I would love to see more of Jonas and Mina:)
10/4/2018 c1 13Shailaputri
Enjoyed reading it.. Liked the way she used the Russian name..And him sticking to it is kind of cute
Enjoyed reading it.. Liked the way she used the Russian name..And him sticking to it is kind of cute
7/6/2018 c1 Guest
Cute!
Cute!
11/20/2015 c1 Guest
That was well written - realistic and perfectly paced. :D
That was well written - realistic and perfectly paced. :D
8/1/2015 c1 Guest
I loved this!
I loved that she wasn't insanely in love with him and that they're chemistry was so heated that it'd make any chemistry teacher is usually the case with most stories here.
They seemed real and genuine.
You are a great author!
I loved this!
I loved that she wasn't insanely in love with him and that they're chemistry was so heated that it'd make any chemistry teacher is usually the case with most stories here.
They seemed real and genuine.
You are a great author!
7/26/2014 c1 yomna elgerzawy
This one was good :D but honestly, you dont have to listen to old songs and don't know the jonas brothers and blablabla to be unique and amazing :)
This one was good :D but honestly, you dont have to listen to old songs and don't know the jonas brothers and blablabla to be unique and amazing :)
7/7/2014 c2 Never Ever Back Down
I don't usually take coffee but reading this makes me wanna try out a French Vanilla Cappuccino! Simona really does remind me of a classmate of mine. She dances too. The only difference is that I sing along. ) I really loved it. You could have added a bit more about Jo's paintings though. When I read the name Mina, Wilhelmina sort of stumbled into my head. The soda incident really did not ruin the date. :) I just love Jo and the relationship between the two. It makes me wish I knew someone of the likes. Anyway, great story. Loved every bit of it! Especially how everything was related to the plot.
I don't usually take coffee but reading this makes me wanna try out a French Vanilla Cappuccino! Simona really does remind me of a classmate of mine. She dances too. The only difference is that I sing along. ) I really loved it. You could have added a bit more about Jo's paintings though. When I read the name Mina, Wilhelmina sort of stumbled into my head. The soda incident really did not ruin the date. :) I just love Jo and the relationship between the two. It makes me wish I knew someone of the likes. Anyway, great story. Loved every bit of it! Especially how everything was related to the plot.
1/26/2014 c2 DragonOwl
I love this story! It's so good - I really like their relaxed relationship and the input of the Morrissey tshirt!
I love this story! It's so good - I really like their relaxed relationship and the input of the Morrissey tshirt!
1/1/2014 c1 5TheBatismyMan
This is such an awesome story! The elements and tidbits just doesn't stand as elements and tidbits in your story, rather something taking part in your plot! Really good!
This is such an awesome story! The elements and tidbits just doesn't stand as elements and tidbits in your story, rather something taking part in your plot! Really good!
7/21/2013 c2 leavemeialone
So I finally have read this oneshot. Unfortunately, I am terrible at constructive criticism. But I will say that I really did enjoy this story. It was very cute. I love how you mentioned how the Morrissey shirt evolved into its own, I think it is great just seeing how the stories become. I don't know how to explain but this story was just so adorable. I cannot believe how he kept following her and she never said anything. Overall, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this. XD
So I finally have read this oneshot. Unfortunately, I am terrible at constructive criticism. But I will say that I really did enjoy this story. It was very cute. I love how you mentioned how the Morrissey shirt evolved into its own, I think it is great just seeing how the stories become. I don't know how to explain but this story was just so adorable. I cannot believe how he kept following her and she never said anything. Overall, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this. XD