for Morrissey Made Me Love Him11/15/2012 c1 Robin
Just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed your story. It's not much of a critique but I really did enjoy it so there! :)
Just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed your story. It's not much of a critique but I really did enjoy it so there! :)
9/30/2012 c1 
1elle is a punk
This was *amazing*. I can hardly tell you how much I loved this, but...man, it was great! Haha. Hope to read more from you soon!
1elle is a punkThis was *amazing*. I can hardly tell you how much I loved this, but...man, it was great! Haha. Hope to read more from you soon!
9/13/2012 c1 1Peachy-09
Now this is a kind of indie, different story that I love to read and you delivered perfectly. Wonderful.
1Peachy-09Now this is a kind of indie, different story that I love to read and you delivered perfectly. Wonderful.
9/11/2012 c1 heal me forever
i totally love it obv ;) hmm wat abut ur guy poor him he might be missing u ;) :P
i totally love it obv ;) hmm wat abut ur guy poor him he might be missing u ;) :P
8/26/2012 c1 2Cathy Casam
O lord, you are a genious. I love this story, I love the idea, I love all the characters, I love the dialogues and interactions, I love your sense
2Cathy CasamO lord, you are a genious. I love this story, I love the idea, I love all the characters, I love the dialogues and interactions, I love your sense
8/26/2012 c1 18FreekyDisaster18
Hey! I am here to share some exciting news. This story has been added to the One Shot category over on A Drop of Romeo!
Here's the Review:
"Helen Thinks: The cliché of being seduced by a boy in your class is taken to a whole new level in this extremely cute one shot by throwingstars.
Mina, our female protagonist, is starting a psychology course where she’s noticing people’s clothes because she likes to see the diversity when she sees a guy walk in wearing a vintage ‘The Smiths’ tee. Even though he sits beside her no matter where she’s situated herself in the theatre, he never says two words to her until the day she has to sign the register form first and he asks if ‘Mina Hautter’ is her name...
An added bonus to this exceptional story is that throwingstars manages to add humour so excellently; it’s perceived as perfectly natural. The characters interactions will have you smiling along with them, at some parts even chuckling. Not only are their interactions enough to make you see how realistic these characters are but their individual quirks are too. For example, Mina’s addiction to coffee which is most definitely an addiction for most college students – yes, I am speaking from experience.
“Morrissey Made Me Love Him” makes many references to pop culture that allows for the reader to relate to the story. All in all, this is an extremely cute one shot that everyone should make time to read."
Keep writing,
Helen xo
18FreekyDisaster18Hey! I am here to share some exciting news. This story has been added to the One Shot category over on A Drop of Romeo!
Here's the Review:
"Helen Thinks: The cliché of being seduced by a boy in your class is taken to a whole new level in this extremely cute one shot by throwingstars.
Mina, our female protagonist, is starting a psychology course where she’s noticing people’s clothes because she likes to see the diversity when she sees a guy walk in wearing a vintage ‘The Smiths’ tee. Even though he sits beside her no matter where she’s situated herself in the theatre, he never says two words to her until the day she has to sign the register form first and he asks if ‘Mina Hautter’ is her name...
An added bonus to this exceptional story is that throwingstars manages to add humour so excellently; it’s perceived as perfectly natural. The characters interactions will have you smiling along with them, at some parts even chuckling. Not only are their interactions enough to make you see how realistic these characters are but their individual quirks are too. For example, Mina’s addiction to coffee which is most definitely an addiction for most college students – yes, I am speaking from experience.
“Morrissey Made Me Love Him” makes many references to pop culture that allows for the reader to relate to the story. All in all, this is an extremely cute one shot that everyone should make time to read."
Keep writing,
Helen xo
4/13/2012 c1 8theKnobblyKneedWriter
I actually loved this so so so SO much! It was beautifully refreshing and well written. And I went through two whopping great cups of coffee while reading it. ;) Thanks for a great story. I'm off to stalk your profile now. BEWARE.
8theKnobblyKneedWriterI actually loved this so so so SO much! It was beautifully refreshing and well written. And I went through two whopping great cups of coffee while reading it. ;) Thanks for a great story. I'm off to stalk your profile now. BEWARE.
10/19/2011 c1 8DorkExpress
How cute! I should tell someone my alter ego name so they can call me that. Fang. Lilly Fang. Too dorky?
XOXO
8DorkExpressHow cute! I should tell someone my alter ego name so they can call me that. Fang. Lilly Fang. Too dorky?
XOXO
6/29/2011 c1 Swanlight
I love it. It's so sweat and meaningful. You are a great author.
I love it. It's so sweat and meaningful. You are a great author.
6/10/2011 c1 buznuz1
I have read this story atleast 5 times over the past year and a half and it never gets old. It's not dramatic or over the top, but just a nice, sweet, cute story about a boy and a girl that fall in love. Great job :) please continue writing!
I have read this story atleast 5 times over the past year and a half and it never gets old. It's not dramatic or over the top, but just a nice, sweet, cute story about a boy and a girl that fall in love. Great job :) please continue writing!
1/4/2011 c1 25Kyllex
This was actually really cute. I love how he just follows her around class but is too shy to say anything to her. I also love the whole shirt ordeal and Simona, too! Jonas is adorable. (:
The only thing I found hard to believe was the fact that they said "I love you" so fast. I don't know, it just seemed pretty quick. They'd only been dating, what, like a few weeks? If that?
Anyway. I really did like this a lot. It was cute. I know I said that already, gosh! I just...thought it was really cute. Haha.
Nice job!
25KyllexThis was actually really cute. I love how he just follows her around class but is too shy to say anything to her. I also love the whole shirt ordeal and Simona, too! Jonas is adorable. (:
The only thing I found hard to believe was the fact that they said "I love you" so fast. I don't know, it just seemed pretty quick. They'd only been dating, what, like a few weeks? If that?
Anyway. I really did like this a lot. It was cute. I know I said that already, gosh! I just...thought it was really cute. Haha.
Nice job!