5/30/2010 c1 3Katie Valentine
I love how this one-shot is long! It made me uber happy! :D Jonas is too cute, honestly!
I love how this one-shot is long! It made me uber happy! :D Jonas is too cute, honestly!
5/30/2010 c1 1x Farii
This was insanely cute! xD
Plus i read it on my cell phone and immidietly logged into the computer just to review and favorite it! :P x]
This was insanely cute! xD
Plus i read it on my cell phone and immidietly logged into the computer just to review and favorite it! :P x]
4/12/2010 c1 1Robyn2250
I really enjoyed this story. I don't know what I'd think if a guy was following me around the classroom at college, though. I'm glad he turned out to be pretty awesome in the end. I liked your characterization of both of them. They were both pretty quirky (especially her roommate), but it was still believable.
Great job!
I really enjoyed this story. I don't know what I'd think if a guy was following me around the classroom at college, though. I'm glad he turned out to be pretty awesome in the end. I liked your characterization of both of them. They were both pretty quirky (especially her roommate), but it was still believable.
Great job!
3/27/2010 c1 5itsVKEE
I thought this story was brilliant. Excellent. Brilliant! Not an error in sight. This story has so much flow and there's just no fault to it. Honestly I don't care about affilates and things you do/don't own. This story is just wow.
So cute.
Happy Writing.
xox
VKEE
I thought this story was brilliant. Excellent. Brilliant! Not an error in sight. This story has so much flow and there's just no fault to it. Honestly I don't care about affilates and things you do/don't own. This story is just wow.
So cute.
Happy Writing.
xox
VKEE
3/6/2010 c1 24Ravina
Great one-shot!
I liked how well you paced it, because it was not too slow or fast.
And it was nice to see that you didn't make her irrationally obsessed with his shirt. By that, I mean based on the title I expected her to fall for him because of the shirt; it was good that the shirt contributed to her interest, and didn't overwhelm the story.
- Rebekah
Great one-shot!
I liked how well you paced it, because it was not too slow or fast.
And it was nice to see that you didn't make her irrationally obsessed with his shirt. By that, I mean based on the title I expected her to fall for him because of the shirt; it was good that the shirt contributed to her interest, and didn't overwhelm the story.
- Rebekah
3/6/2010 c1 courtesylaughs
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Your writing kept me intrigued! Keep up the good work :) By the way, just as I hit the review button, a Morrisey song started playing on my itunes. Scared the crap out of me, realizing how ironic it was.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Your writing kept me intrigued! Keep up the good work :) By the way, just as I hit the review button, a Morrisey song started playing on my itunes. Scared the crap out of me, realizing how ironic it was.
1/27/2010 c1 iiHEARTyuu
Haha, this amused me greatly. I'd find it weird to have some random person sit next to me in every class. But it was cute.
Jonas is awesome :D and I like Simona. She seems nice. And Poppy is pretty crazy.
"I'd love me in this shirt too" made me laugh. Mina is an amusing person.
Haha, this amused me greatly. I'd find it weird to have some random person sit next to me in every class. But it was cute.
Jonas is awesome :D and I like Simona. She seems nice. And Poppy is pretty crazy.
"I'd love me in this shirt too" made me laugh. Mina is an amusing person.
1/23/2010 c1 clavira
*sigh* so cute! i love mushy stuff, and this oneshot is just really nice to read. keep writing :)
*sigh* so cute! i love mushy stuff, and this oneshot is just really nice to read. keep writing :)
1/15/2010 c1 4Lady Katreina
This is such a cute story, I love their interaction and growing closeness. It could totally happen too, though I wish it would happen! n.n Thank you.
This is such a cute story, I love their interaction and growing closeness. It could totally happen too, though I wish it would happen! n.n Thank you.