for there's a wind on the way9/29/2009 c1 
97rust phoenix
Welcome back to fictionpress. I've missed your poems, and I'm glad you've posted more for me to read. I really, really like this piece. The metaphors are unique without being incomprehensible, and the flow and the imagery is wonderful. I love the last two lines. The whole piece is gorgeous but those just tie it up so perfectly, the contrast of weak and wonderful but at the same time I can relate to the feeling you are describing. Great work. Keep writing!
-r.p.
97rust phoenixWelcome back to fictionpress. I've missed your poems, and I'm glad you've posted more for me to read. I really, really like this piece. The metaphors are unique without being incomprehensible, and the flow and the imagery is wonderful. I love the last two lines. The whole piece is gorgeous but those just tie it up so perfectly, the contrast of weak and wonderful but at the same time I can relate to the feeling you are describing. Great work. Keep writing!
-r.p.