for Love and Sacrafice10/14/2009 c2 
1Illiteracy
her relationship with sam felt so..fast.. hahahah! aww paul doesn't sound like a loser anymore... maybe he just did in my head... anyway! interesting story. lookin forward to seein the love blossomin:D:D:D ahahah
oh dude. there are some errors in both chapters. nothing that double-checking cannot fix:]]
1Illiteracyher relationship with sam felt so..fast.. hahahah! aww paul doesn't sound like a loser anymore... maybe he just did in my head... anyway! interesting story. lookin forward to seein the love blossomin:D:D:D ahahah
oh dude. there are some errors in both chapters. nothing that double-checking cannot fix:]]
10/14/2009 c1 Illiteracy
funny how you made paul introduce himself:)) sounds just like a loser:D
...still deciding whether it's the nice kind of loser, or the annoying kind...
funny how you made paul introduce himself:)) sounds just like a loser:D
...still deciding whether it's the nice kind of loser, or the annoying kind...
10/3/2009 c1 54wishing.on.echoes
This is a good piece, though some editing could be used.
There were a few grammatical issues.
Overall, this was nice.
54wishing.on.echoesThis is a good piece, though some editing could be used.
There were a few grammatical issues.
Overall, this was nice.