
10/6/2009 c1
12Broken-Angel-1994
I liked this a lot. You described the characters great. Even the ones that weren't the main characters, you gave them all their personalities. Great job. I'd love to read more of this! Update soon please!

I liked this a lot. You described the characters great. Even the ones that weren't the main characters, you gave them all their personalities. Great job. I'd love to read more of this! Update soon please!
10/6/2009 c1 Danny Girl
HI
I love it..I love that he's not that confident with trying to start a relationship with her...that he does not want it to be like a fling he would have with anyother girl. It seems hes trying to do things right...It cute he needs a wing man.
O I just love your mastersons stories.
Continue the GREAT work!
HI
I love it..I love that he's not that confident with trying to start a relationship with her...that he does not want it to be like a fling he would have with anyother girl. It seems hes trying to do things right...It cute he needs a wing man.
O I just love your mastersons stories.
Continue the GREAT work!
10/6/2009 c1
3happiness.means.friends
Yay! Can't wait to read more :P This sounds cute, Brock sounds more like my kinda of guy than logan or river: cocky but a passionate artist... :) Please update soon :)

Yay! Can't wait to read more :P This sounds cute, Brock sounds more like my kinda of guy than logan or river: cocky but a passionate artist... :) Please update soon :)
10/6/2009 c1 sappyromancelvr
aw!
Kansas sounds like such a cutie!
Brock sound really nice too.
:)
Update soon!
aw!
Kansas sounds like such a cutie!
Brock sound really nice too.
:)
Update soon!