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13Teeiinneell
th end of this chapter made me crack up...the whole "river falling for fallon" thing is hilarious :D
13Teeiinneellth end of this chapter made me crack up...the whole "river falling for fallon" thing is hilarious :D
11/13/2009 c5 18FreekyDisaster18
This story was suggested to me by Castiel89 and damn, am I glad she did because it's GREAT! I envy how mature your writing is and hell, they sure sound like a great family of boys. I'm away to read the rest now and I'm all excited :)
18FreekyDisaster18This story was suggested to me by Castiel89 and damn, am I glad she did because it's GREAT! I envy how mature your writing is and hell, they sure sound like a great family of boys. I'm away to read the rest now and I'm all excited :)
11/9/2009 c5 Elle Winters 9
A great feel good story. It's also has a realistic ending as Brock still keeps his personality a bit instead of becoming a completely different perfect guy person. I put off studying for my finals for you! Oh the dedication :)
A great feel good story. It's also has a realistic ending as Brock still keeps his personality a bit instead of becoming a completely different perfect guy person. I put off studying for my finals for you! Oh the dedication :)
11/7/2009 c5 A Merry Savant
Brock was sweet...
But River was silly.
. Last line here shows Brock as still a Masterson lol
Brock was sweet...
But River was silly.
. Last line here shows Brock as still a Masterson lol
11/6/2009 c5 6Sunshine0325
Nice.
Very, very, very nice.
Amazing, actually.
this was really good! Not as good as the other stories, i have to admit, but it was good nonetheless.
I knew it from the very beginning when brock was assigned the art assignment that his topic would be love and that he would be drawing kansas. (btw, i like that name, and not only because i live in kansas!)
i'll be reading forrest's story soon, but before i read his, i wanna read the oneshot you wrote for river and fallon. it seems like such a long time ago that you wrote that story. its weird...
anyways, great job on this one! i really liked it!
6Sunshine0325Nice.
Very, very, very nice.
Amazing, actually.
this was really good! Not as good as the other stories, i have to admit, but it was good nonetheless.
I knew it from the very beginning when brock was assigned the art assignment that his topic would be love and that he would be drawing kansas. (btw, i like that name, and not only because i live in kansas!)
i'll be reading forrest's story soon, but before i read his, i wanna read the oneshot you wrote for river and fallon. it seems like such a long time ago that you wrote that story. its weird...
anyways, great job on this one! i really liked it!
11/4/2009 c5 Typically Chelzabeth
OH! I absitively, posolutely LOVED the ending! And I'm so glad I'm caught up now. I had so much going on that I hadn't read the last 2 chapters, but now I have and I loved them!
Now, I need to get started on "You Belong With Me". Can you believe it? I've read everything except that one...ah well, I never like to do things in order, that's just too normal...
Anyhoo, great job!
~Chelsea Elizabeth
OH! I absitively, posolutely LOVED the ending! And I'm so glad I'm caught up now. I had so much going on that I hadn't read the last 2 chapters, but now I have and I loved them!
Now, I need to get started on "You Belong With Me". Can you believe it? I've read everything except that one...ah well, I never like to do things in order, that's just too normal...
Anyhoo, great job!
~Chelsea Elizabeth
11/3/2009 c5 3ShadowBrilliance
I think I'm going to cry! I LOVED this story, just as much as Logan's story and ALMOST as much as River's story. :). I LOVED IT. I'm just sad it had to come to an end *sigh*, make sure that one-shot and Forrest's story ISN'T short! I wanna know, hey, again, is little Lena going to be in it? I miss her. :). Post 'em up soon!
I Heart ?
3ShadowBrillianceI think I'm going to cry! I LOVED this story, just as much as Logan's story and ALMOST as much as River's story. :). I LOVED IT. I'm just sad it had to come to an end *sigh*, make sure that one-shot and Forrest's story ISN'T short! I wanna know, hey, again, is little Lena going to be in it? I miss her. :). Post 'em up soon!
I Heart ?
11/3/2009 c5 1xoxtina46xox
This was an adorable chapter and story :) I love the sensitive nervous wreck Brock was and it's always fun how your stories intertwine. Can't wait for the one-shot of River and Fallon!
1xoxtina46xoxThis was an adorable chapter and story :) I love the sensitive nervous wreck Brock was and it's always fun how your stories intertwine. Can't wait for the one-shot of River and Fallon!
11/3/2009 c5 strawberryshortcake101
Wow!
I love this one! Its one were is sweet and short and wonderful!
I can't wait for the River and Fallon one!
Wow!
I love this one! Its one were is sweet and short and wonderful!
I can't wait for the River and Fallon one!
11/3/2009 c5 4lulu.lemon
So cute! I really love your stories :)
So is River's and Fallon's one shot going to be while they're dating?
4lulu.lemonSo cute! I really love your stories :)
So is River's and Fallon's one shot going to be while they're dating?
11/3/2009 c5 3Jackie.Forever
Aw! That was so cute! I loved it! I just love Brock!
Very well written! :]
3Jackie.ForeverAw! That was so cute! I loved it! I just love Brock!
Very well written! :]
11/3/2009 c5 2asianinvasion0530
Yay it's done! =] Haha they're so cute together too.
Haha heck yes I'm excited for Forrest's story!
2asianinvasion0530Yay it's done! =] Haha they're so cute together too.
Haha heck yes I'm excited for Forrest's story!