for The Street Pianist2/7/2010 c1 
17FireInsideMyself
This is magnificent. The descriptions were perfect and they made the pianist seem surreal. I like the emotions that swirl throughout the words as well. Well done!
17FireInsideMyselfThis is magnificent. The descriptions were perfect and they made the pianist seem surreal. I like the emotions that swirl throughout the words as well. Well done!
12/2/2009 c1 11Caoimhe Rose
very sentamental. and sad too. it really shows how much we as people who have stuff, look on those who are less fortuante. Especially as the Christmas Season comes, we should be thankful for what we have got.
really enjoyed reading it.
11Caoimhe Rosevery sentamental. and sad too. it really shows how much we as people who have stuff, look on those who are less fortuante. Especially as the Christmas Season comes, we should be thankful for what we have got.
really enjoyed reading it.
10/6/2009 c1 Fluffy Catfish
Aw, poor baby :(
Aw, poor baby :(
10/6/2009 c1 WutNow
I'm happy to be the first person to review this.
Overall, I thought the description was very vivid. I was really captivated by the detail, by the lonely character, by the environment, everything. You wrote a very beautiful thing and I would like to thank you for sharing.
However, One thing confused me- what do you mean no one ever looked up? I imagined the woman sitting on the floor playing and that the people were inspired by her music, and when she left, they were frozen in place because it was so captivating, at least, that's how I interpreted it. Is that what you meant by no one ever looked up?
Either that or she played beautifully but no one noticed? I don't know, maybe i just missed something haha.
Anyway, thank you so much for sharing this. It was great.
Keep writing :)
I hope that you have a chance to read my story as well. I would love to hear from you.
Hoping to see you soon :)
-Agent
I'm happy to be the first person to review this.
Overall, I thought the description was very vivid. I was really captivated by the detail, by the lonely character, by the environment, everything. You wrote a very beautiful thing and I would like to thank you for sharing.
However, One thing confused me- what do you mean no one ever looked up? I imagined the woman sitting on the floor playing and that the people were inspired by her music, and when she left, they were frozen in place because it was so captivating, at least, that's how I interpreted it. Is that what you meant by no one ever looked up?
Either that or she played beautifully but no one noticed? I don't know, maybe i just missed something haha.
Anyway, thank you so much for sharing this. It was great.
Keep writing :)
I hope that you have a chance to read my story as well. I would love to hear from you.
Hoping to see you soon :)
-Agent