for The Promise10/7/2009 c1 
24James Michaelis
A wonderful beginning. Really sets the stage for the rising action, climax, and falling action. Also, it gave me a good preview of who and what Kadri is as a person, and it's a good focal point to build the story around.
Looking forward to reading more.
-D.D.
24James MichaelisA wonderful beginning. Really sets the stage for the rising action, climax, and falling action. Also, it gave me a good preview of who and what Kadri is as a person, and it's a good focal point to build the story around.
Looking forward to reading more.
-D.D.