for Just an Ordinary Friday Night10/3/2013 c1 
1Exsomnis
I quite enjoyed your characters and the flow of the story. You did a nice job on this and it was a pleasure to read.
1ExsomnisI quite enjoyed your characters and the flow of the story. You did a nice job on this and it was a pleasure to read.
4/7/2010 c1 Vici Daily
Hey hey, that was pretty good! Great actually, lol. There was a part in the beginning when she's helping carry her brother down the stairs and you mix of the names of him and Jordan, but I understood what you meant. Again, good job! -Angela
Hey hey, that was pretty good! Great actually, lol. There was a part in the beginning when she's helping carry her brother down the stairs and you mix of the names of him and Jordan, but I understood what you meant. Again, good job! -Angela
10/9/2009 c1 LaLa
This was a good story and this is one of my favorite cliches. I wish there was more of her and Jordan. It just seems to be a little rushed at the end. There was a part where you mixed up Jordan and Ryan and instead of come on you wrote come one. I did enjoy it and it was well written.
This was a good story and this is one of my favorite cliches. I wish there was more of her and Jordan. It just seems to be a little rushed at the end. There was a part where you mixed up Jordan and Ryan and instead of come on you wrote come one. I did enjoy it and it was well written.