for Broken Telephone5/9/2020 c8 Guest
Damn this was so promising but this some white folk shit...
Here’s the ending for everyone she ruined the damn wedding. The end.
Damn this was so promising but this some white folk shit...
Here’s the ending for everyone she ruined the damn wedding. The end.
2/9/2019 c8 Guest
Omg! I eyed moreeee.
Omg! I eyed moreeee.
12/16/2017 c8 Guest
Please please update. I’ve loved this story and I can’t wait to see how it ends!
Please please update. I’ve loved this story and I can’t wait to see how it ends!
1/23/2017 c1 Likeajellyfish
I keep coming back to this story hoping there's an update. Wish you are doing fine..
I keep coming back to this story hoping there's an update. Wish you are doing fine..
9/4/2016 c1 Jade
I think every year I come back and check if you've returned! I hope you're still writing and I hope you come back to fiction press or better yet I hope you've got some of your work published! I'll be back next year begging you to come back! (but hopefully you return before that!)
Hope you're well!
I think every year I come back and check if you've returned! I hope you're still writing and I hope you come back to fiction press or better yet I hope you've got some of your work published! I'll be back next year begging you to come back! (but hopefully you return before that!)
Hope you're well!
4/8/2016 c1 
4RevolutionaryDreamer
Hey Penny as always your stories are fantastically awesome, you really have a way with word and you manage to capture both mine and a lot of others full attention. However i would just like to mention a heads up about a mistake you unfortunately keep repeating.
Beware of the words "Your" and "You're" because unfortunately you tend to use especially "You're" in a sentence that should say "Your"
Fx. "You're head" should be "Your"
Anyway i just wanted to quickly mention it because otherwise than that your stories are completely captivating and i really wish you would write more, i feel like i am so many years late to finally having discovered your stories because i have been looking after a needle in a haystack after good stories on this site and then finally i happen to stumble upon yours, merely by thinking about trying the romance section
But thank you for your amazing stories, and i really really hope you someday would consider finishing "Broken Telefone" cause this is amazing. I have no idea where your amazing idea come from but i wish i knew
Anyway, thank you very much for making my day brighter, i've also already finished two others of your stories. SWTE and its sequel of course, loved them so much gotta say
4RevolutionaryDreamerHey Penny as always your stories are fantastically awesome, you really have a way with word and you manage to capture both mine and a lot of others full attention. However i would just like to mention a heads up about a mistake you unfortunately keep repeating.
Beware of the words "Your" and "You're" because unfortunately you tend to use especially "You're" in a sentence that should say "Your"
Fx. "You're head" should be "Your"
Anyway i just wanted to quickly mention it because otherwise than that your stories are completely captivating and i really wish you would write more, i feel like i am so many years late to finally having discovered your stories because i have been looking after a needle in a haystack after good stories on this site and then finally i happen to stumble upon yours, merely by thinking about trying the romance section
But thank you for your amazing stories, and i really really hope you someday would consider finishing "Broken Telefone" cause this is amazing. I have no idea where your amazing idea come from but i wish i knew
Anyway, thank you very much for making my day brighter, i've also already finished two others of your stories. SWTE and its sequel of course, loved them so much gotta say
9/5/2015 c8 Reader
One more? Really? You said it yourself, right.
Pleeeeaase? It's even a short one!
One more? Really? You said it yourself, right.
Pleeeeaase? It's even a short one!
6/2/2015 c8 svenn
holy shit, I just really need that last chapter. I love how each character is so distinctly themselves. I feel that if I were to just be given a dialogue quote, I'd ve able to immediately tell who said it because you wrote them with such style. It's a shame you haven't updated in years.
holy shit, I just really need that last chapter. I love how each character is so distinctly themselves. I feel that if I were to just be given a dialogue quote, I'd ve able to immediately tell who said it because you wrote them with such style. It's a shame you haven't updated in years.
9/14/2014 c8 Pseudonym59
Ahh, I just reread this after a year or so and I have to say I really love it. The relationships between all the characters are so realistic and amusing. I do find it odd how it never came up between Ben and Sarah that Ben had a twin, though. I hope you update soon!
Ahh, I just reread this after a year or so and I have to say I really love it. The relationships between all the characters are so realistic and amusing. I do find it odd how it never came up between Ben and Sarah that Ben had a twin, though. I hope you update soon!
9/23/2013 c8 genuisgina
shit! nw u've gone and ruined sarah's wedding. too much drama...bt i'm hooked anyway,curious abt wat's going to happen soon ok?
shit! nw u've gone and ruined sarah's wedding. too much drama...bt i'm hooked anyway,curious abt wat's going to happen soon ok?