
7/9/2010 c1 commonplacething
It's interesting. The title kind of changes things for me, I see these works to be more about men then about women. Reveals more about the male psyche which I was not expecting. I enjoyed the warning.
It's interesting. The title kind of changes things for me, I see these works to be more about men then about women. Reveals more about the male psyche which I was not expecting. I enjoyed the warning.
5/6/2010 c3
53Nick Ransom
Gah...tell me you're writing more of these. They're lovely, I just wish they were a bit longer and more..descriptive. And violent.

Gah...tell me you're writing more of these. They're lovely, I just wish they were a bit longer and more..descriptive. And violent.
5/5/2010 c2 Nick Ransom
"boiling water drips from the girls tangled innards"
Delicious.
I'm looking forward to reading more of these, I'm in love with the way you write.
"boiling water drips from the girls tangled innards"
Delicious.
I'm looking forward to reading more of these, I'm in love with the way you write.
5/5/2010 c3
32Shelley Anderson
The dark side of me enjoyed these stories, and the white side of me was revolted. Perfect.

The dark side of me enjoyed these stories, and the white side of me was revolted. Perfect.