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3/3/2014 c2 Spark n jetz
This is a great story! I have an account I'm just too lazy to sign in. Sorry. Anyway, good job.
12/7/2009 c5 2Mike73
Yes! You've started updating again!

Nice to see how you've been keeping it going, and I like how's it's gone. There are a few grammar errors taht I saw, however, that you'llbe able to fix quickly when you have the time.
10/10/2009 c1 Mike73
Well, I like it. I like how you are moving into the story slowly, giving some backstory, but not too much. Chapter 1 is good, showing his regular routine. Helps show the realism of the story, which is important for the scnerio you have chosen.

Your voab choice is good, and I saw no grammar mistakes.

I like it so far, and I hope to see more soon. :)

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