10/11/2009 c1 5Xbakiyalo
HA! That was wonderful! Reminds me of Jeeves and Wooster, the dialogue of the EVLAA representative. Wonderful stuff! I was actually laughing at the end. The Evil Overlord was also great - I love the line "I don’t need permission from the damn EVLAA! I am invincible! Invincible, I say! Mwahahaha! Mwahahaha! Mwahahahaha!". Brilliant!
If you have time, it would be great if you could check out one of my stories =)
Anna xx
HA! That was wonderful! Reminds me of Jeeves and Wooster, the dialogue of the EVLAA representative. Wonderful stuff! I was actually laughing at the end. The Evil Overlord was also great - I love the line "I don’t need permission from the damn EVLAA! I am invincible! Invincible, I say! Mwahahaha! Mwahahaha! Mwahahahaha!". Brilliant!
If you have time, it would be great if you could check out one of my stories =)
Anna xx
10/10/2009 c1 3Typing Typhoon
Whaa? ... ... ...
That there was a perfect mixture of pure wit and genius. If you expand on this chapter you could have potential comic gold here. :)
Whaa? ... ... ...
That there was a perfect mixture of pure wit and genius. If you expand on this chapter you could have potential comic gold here. :)