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34Lyra Pocaterra
I like it :) Very well written and good to read. Was she a vampire? Was she really Annabelle or just looked like her friend? The only minor detail I would change is in "and he screamed in fright and tried her hardest to fight me off" where I think you meant to write "and SHE screamed...", but apart from that its really good.
34Lyra PocaterraI like it :) Very well written and good to read. Was she a vampire? Was she really Annabelle or just looked like her friend? The only minor detail I would change is in "and he screamed in fright and tried her hardest to fight me off" where I think you meant to write "and SHE screamed...", but apart from that its really good.