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10/13/2009 c1 6R.G. Angel
I believe this to have great potential. You have a main character who has some troubles, you have a wonderful way of describing things.

However, I am slightly confused. I've forgotten how to swim and the sink was stained like me. Then you talk about Jamie. Is me and Jamie the same person or two different people. Err... does my question even make sense? Please forgive me if it doesn't!

But yea, I do think you have something going here and should you continue with it, I will be around to review it for you!

~Angel

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