for Where I'll Leave Tomorrow2/10/2010 c28 
1HeartsOfDiamonds
AHH! the suspense is killing me. i hope spencer breaks up with her and goes to amelia. THen, sienna goes to riley. happy ending! :) and yes.. evil is my middle name. Not really.. but, my friend's middle name is eliv. random. o.O
1HeartsOfDiamondsAHH! the suspense is killing me. i hope spencer breaks up with her and goes to amelia. THen, sienna goes to riley. happy ending! :) and yes.. evil is my middle name. Not really.. but, my friend's middle name is eliv. random. o.O
2/10/2010 c28 3dontneedyou
Hey, you made a couple mistakes like writing "I" instead of "him". Like, "I doesn’t hate you, you know, he just hates what you did to me." You know? There weren't that many, maybe two or three.
Anyway, you're an amazing writer, you know that right?
SO MUCH INTENSITY, TOO MUCH TOO MUCH. It's driving me crazy!
I wonder what the eff Spencer is going to do now that he know. OH GOD. Well, I don't want them to get married, but then again, I still feel bad for Spencer. He's not a bad guy.
But I still want her to end up with Riley.
PLEASE CAN CHRISTIAN COME OUT OF THE CLOSET NEXT CHAPTER? Haha.
Seriously, that's driving me crazy.
I hope Spencer isn't too mad at Sienna. Actually, I hope he's REALLY mad at her. Because I would be. She deserves it. But seriously, who could resist Riley? So, not her fault. I'm joking, it is her fault. It's Riley's fault too, but Riley isn't cheating on anyone, so it's worse for Sienna.
I adore Riley. I just do. Because, I mean, he has so much emotion. And he really LOVES Sienna. And he's hurting. Sienna shouldn't do that if someone is going to get hurt in the end. Whatever, I hope she ends up with Riley.
So, yeah, when IS he going to see Arie? Maybe he hasn't seen her yet because Sienna and Riley are scared. I dunno, maybe just the thought of them HAVING a daughter together scares them. And might bring them closer, and they wont be able to control their feelings, WOO. Anyway, I loved the chapter. :)
-dontneedyou
3dontneedyouHey, you made a couple mistakes like writing "I" instead of "him". Like, "I doesn’t hate you, you know, he just hates what you did to me." You know? There weren't that many, maybe two or three.
Anyway, you're an amazing writer, you know that right?
SO MUCH INTENSITY, TOO MUCH TOO MUCH. It's driving me crazy!
I wonder what the eff Spencer is going to do now that he know. OH GOD. Well, I don't want them to get married, but then again, I still feel bad for Spencer. He's not a bad guy.
But I still want her to end up with Riley.
PLEASE CAN CHRISTIAN COME OUT OF THE CLOSET NEXT CHAPTER? Haha.
Seriously, that's driving me crazy.
I hope Spencer isn't too mad at Sienna. Actually, I hope he's REALLY mad at her. Because I would be. She deserves it. But seriously, who could resist Riley? So, not her fault. I'm joking, it is her fault. It's Riley's fault too, but Riley isn't cheating on anyone, so it's worse for Sienna.
I adore Riley. I just do. Because, I mean, he has so much emotion. And he really LOVES Sienna. And he's hurting. Sienna shouldn't do that if someone is going to get hurt in the end. Whatever, I hope she ends up with Riley.
So, yeah, when IS he going to see Arie? Maybe he hasn't seen her yet because Sienna and Riley are scared. I dunno, maybe just the thought of them HAVING a daughter together scares them. And might bring them closer, and they wont be able to control their feelings, WOO. Anyway, I loved the chapter. :)
-dontneedyou
2/10/2010 c28 1ohspastic
YES I'LL BE YOUR VALENTINE! (L) hahahaha
This chapter was packed with emotion. We really got to see inside that pretty head of riley's. :) I feel so bad for him. I also feel realy bad for spencer too. poor guy. To be honest, this has got to be the best love triangle or... love rectangle? (if you count amelia...) i have ever seen. has it been nominated for skow?
Excellento job!
1ohspasticYES I'LL BE YOUR VALENTINE! (L) hahahaha
This chapter was packed with emotion. We really got to see inside that pretty head of riley's. :) I feel so bad for him. I also feel realy bad for spencer too. poor guy. To be honest, this has got to be the best love triangle or... love rectangle? (if you count amelia...) i have ever seen. has it been nominated for skow?
Excellento job!
2/9/2010 c28 10Sorraya T
haha nice. lol i love it when rileys sweet it reminds of when he first fell in love with sienna in TLIW :)
omg i hate hickeys :| they are so annoying. at new years i had to wear concealer every day until they faded. it was so irritating! poor sienna. hickeys are always a downfall i swear.
but janeys a hypocrite. worse really, because she did a whole lot more shit with riley than sienna did...
oh i almost forgot to add my usual rant about how awesome you are at writing.
OMG THAT IS TERRIFIC HOW ARE YOU SO FRIGGIN GOOD CANT RILEY AND ARIE AND SIENNA JUST BE A FAMILY PLEASE? AAHH I LOVE THIS I SWEAR IM ADDICTED!
10Sorraya Thaha nice. lol i love it when rileys sweet it reminds of when he first fell in love with sienna in TLIW :)
omg i hate hickeys :| they are so annoying. at new years i had to wear concealer every day until they faded. it was so irritating! poor sienna. hickeys are always a downfall i swear.
but janeys a hypocrite. worse really, because she did a whole lot more shit with riley than sienna did...
oh i almost forgot to add my usual rant about how awesome you are at writing.
OMG THAT IS TERRIFIC HOW ARE YOU SO FRIGGIN GOOD CANT RILEY AND ARIE AND SIENNA JUST BE A FAMILY PLEASE? AAHH I LOVE THIS I SWEAR IM ADDICTED!
2/9/2010 c28 colourmyworld
I'm about to fucking kill you.
YOU LOVE MAKING READERS PANIC!
HERE! YOU'LL FUCKING LOVE THIS!
HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT WITH SUCH A BIG CLIFFIE?
RILEY SUCKS... (HAHA)
POOR SPENCER
HOW CAN YOU LEAVE ME WITH SUCH A SCENE WHEN IM ABOUT TO LEAVE FOR NEW ZEALAND
IM LEAVING TOMORROW
AND ITS SO MESSED UP
WRONG TIME TO BE GOING
HES TOTALLY IGNORING ME
AND THE GUY WHO LIKES ME KEEPS TRYING TO BE WHERE I AM
I LIKE JONATHAN NOT SIRAD
GOD DAMN IT IM FREAKING OUT!
I'm about to fucking kill you.
YOU LOVE MAKING READERS PANIC!
HERE! YOU'LL FUCKING LOVE THIS!
HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT WITH SUCH A BIG CLIFFIE?
RILEY SUCKS... (HAHA)
POOR SPENCER
HOW CAN YOU LEAVE ME WITH SUCH A SCENE WHEN IM ABOUT TO LEAVE FOR NEW ZEALAND
IM LEAVING TOMORROW
AND ITS SO MESSED UP
WRONG TIME TO BE GOING
HES TOTALLY IGNORING ME
AND THE GUY WHO LIKES ME KEEPS TRYING TO BE WHERE I AM
I LIKE JONATHAN NOT SIRAD
GOD DAMN IT IM FREAKING OUT!
2/8/2010 c27 Hemii25
HOLY SH*T! I KNEW IT! Mainly because you already told me haha. That chapter was gorgeous. My best friend is going to freak when she reads this. Her name is Bianca. Anyways. I "wonder" what "Daddy" did to her... haha. As if I don;t know that either. *shudder*
HOLY SH*T! I KNEW IT! Mainly because you already told me haha. That chapter was gorgeous. My best friend is going to freak when she reads this. Her name is Bianca. Anyways. I "wonder" what "Daddy" did to her... haha. As if I don;t know that either. *shudder*
2/8/2010 c26 Hemii25
Whoa thats a lot of pages. STM was like 290-something. I feel lazy now. That's a pretty bitchin' cliffhanger. Good thing I have a whole other chapter to read.
Whoa thats a lot of pages. STM was like 290-something. I feel lazy now. That's a pretty bitchin' cliffhanger. Good thing I have a whole other chapter to read.
2/7/2010 c27 3ShadowBrilliance
Lol, yeah, well I'm a bit insane as well.
Well, Thoery # Seven CHECK: Riley is Ariauna's Father.
=). What? Did she say SEVEN! So this was not her FIRST theory! Prediction! Lol. Yep, it is number seven I guessed Riley was the father of Sienna's child. =). I bet I'm making you go mad with curiosity. "Wait, what's her number six down!". Lol. You'll know...oh wait, also, I knew that IF theory number 7 came to be true, theory number 8 would, too. So,
Theory # 8 CHECK. After the results come in, theory number 7 comes true. Sienna and Riley'll have some kind of passion run through.
I feel like a physic! (Think I spelled that wrong, lol.
Well, I've been having those moments lately, kinda scary...=)
Update soon! And, I knew Spencer was hiding something! But, I can't say that was an OFFICIAl theory! I really hope SIenna and Spencer dont keep these girls a secret for long...let alone their secrets.
One Month. Two Weeks. Two Days. Four Hours. 11 Minutes. (It's 5:55 pm right now, February 7th). Yay, go Colts!
-I Heart ?-
3ShadowBrillianceLol, yeah, well I'm a bit insane as well.
Well, Thoery # Seven CHECK: Riley is Ariauna's Father.
=). What? Did she say SEVEN! So this was not her FIRST theory! Prediction! Lol. Yep, it is number seven I guessed Riley was the father of Sienna's child. =). I bet I'm making you go mad with curiosity. "Wait, what's her number six down!". Lol. You'll know...oh wait, also, I knew that IF theory number 7 came to be true, theory number 8 would, too. So,
Theory # 8 CHECK. After the results come in, theory number 7 comes true. Sienna and Riley'll have some kind of passion run through.
I feel like a physic! (Think I spelled that wrong, lol.
Well, I've been having those moments lately, kinda scary...=)
Update soon! And, I knew Spencer was hiding something! But, I can't say that was an OFFICIAl theory! I really hope SIenna and Spencer dont keep these girls a secret for long...let alone their secrets.
One Month. Two Weeks. Two Days. Four Hours. 11 Minutes. (It's 5:55 pm right now, February 7th). Yay, go Colts!
-I Heart ?-
2/7/2010 c27 2WhistlingPekoe
This chapter makes me think that maybe Spencer walked in on his father abusing Bianca in some way, and Spencer retaliated? I don't know if he ended up killing his father or if he was jailed or something? Hmm... it'll be interesting to find out.
Sienna needs to decide... I keep imagining what would happen if Spencer found out. He would be so hurt, and he's such a good soul, it would be terrible =/. I don't envy her position at all though! Even if it is fictional.
I'm liking the parallels between Sienna's secret daughter and Spencer's secret sister... they really do have more in common than they think. I wonder if it will bring them together or tear them apart when it all comes to light. God work =D
2WhistlingPekoeThis chapter makes me think that maybe Spencer walked in on his father abusing Bianca in some way, and Spencer retaliated? I don't know if he ended up killing his father or if he was jailed or something? Hmm... it'll be interesting to find out.
Sienna needs to decide... I keep imagining what would happen if Spencer found out. He would be so hurt, and he's such a good soul, it would be terrible =/. I don't envy her position at all though! Even if it is fictional.
I'm liking the parallels between Sienna's secret daughter and Spencer's secret sister... they really do have more in common than they think. I wonder if it will bring them together or tear them apart when it all comes to light. God work =D
2/7/2010 c27 Guest
my smiley power is amazing. lol. yay, okay im very glad riley is the father instead of that douche bag. i dont know there's just something about sienna and spencer together that doesnt fit. there's not really a ton of passion. she doesnt feel that total consuming feeling she does about riley. thats love, when you love them so much it makes you almost crazy. also riley needs to meet arie! really soon plz
my smiley power is amazing. lol. yay, okay im very glad riley is the father instead of that douche bag. i dont know there's just something about sienna and spencer together that doesnt fit. there's not really a ton of passion. she doesnt feel that total consuming feeling she does about riley. thats love, when you love them so much it makes you almost crazy. also riley needs to meet arie! really soon plz
2/7/2010 c27 15Kit-Kat-KutieXD
oh.my.freaking.God. SHE KISSED HIM AGAIN? Okaay, lets start at the beginning. Wow. We know a little bit more about Spencer now. Awwh, his Nan and sis seem really nicee and sweet! Just wait til Nan finds out that his fiance already has a daughter. She's gonna flip! So both of them are hiding a little girl. but I think Spence is a little more innocent then that, a litte less guilty. So riley's the dad. I knew it! =D And he was being so sweet! Im glad he's the dad. He'd want a part in his daughter's life, I know that for sure! But I think Spence would make a good dad too. Is it just me, or is Sie and Riley gonna end up together? Hmm...just a guess? Iunno. Oh my God. Ewh. They COULDN'T have slept together! no way! NOO FREAKING WAY! I HIGHLY doubt that Riley would take advantage of her in that way, when she was down. Becuz she's not like other girls; he loves her. He'd NEVER do that. Anyway, update soon! I wanna no wat happens next!
-Katt
15Kit-Kat-KutieXDoh.my.freaking.God. SHE KISSED HIM AGAIN? Okaay, lets start at the beginning. Wow. We know a little bit more about Spencer now. Awwh, his Nan and sis seem really nicee and sweet! Just wait til Nan finds out that his fiance already has a daughter. She's gonna flip! So both of them are hiding a little girl. but I think Spence is a little more innocent then that, a litte less guilty. So riley's the dad. I knew it! =D And he was being so sweet! Im glad he's the dad. He'd want a part in his daughter's life, I know that for sure! But I think Spence would make a good dad too. Is it just me, or is Sie and Riley gonna end up together? Hmm...just a guess? Iunno. Oh my God. Ewh. They COULDN'T have slept together! no way! NOO FREAKING WAY! I HIGHLY doubt that Riley would take advantage of her in that way, when she was down. Becuz she's not like other girls; he loves her. He'd NEVER do that. Anyway, update soon! I wanna no wat happens next!
-Katt
2/7/2010 c27 29litgrl-luna
i think in the last nine ive gone to classes, um, like 12-18 times. i loved this chapter, awaiting the next one impatiently :)
29litgrl-lunai think in the last nine ive gone to classes, um, like 12-18 times. i loved this chapter, awaiting the next one impatiently :)
2/7/2010 c27 Alanisaur
This is such a great story it just has so many twists and unexpected things start to happen that sometimes it's hard to follow. Oh, and no matter what Spencer and Sienna have to be together still! He makes her happy and she makes him happy. Plus, Spencer never done anything to hurt Sienna so he doesnt deserve to get hurt. Riley, on the other hand, hurt for selfish reasons when her Ex just died and her best friend tried to do suicide! Not to mention she was pregnent! Spencer is really nice and Riley is an asshole! This story is like the Twilight Saga, minuis the vampires and stuff. Sienna is like Bella, being in love with two guys and all. Riley is like Edward, leaving her, in Riley's case making HER leave him. Finally, Spencers like Jacob, helps her out in her time of need, makes her happy, is promising to never hurt her, and loves her! But sadly he doesnt get the girl! The sparkly vampire does! It's sad really, your story reminds of it, because I wanted Jacob to be happy, bu tno he falls in love with a new born!
Plus, for some reason I think Amelia has a crush on Spencer. Cause all of the things she always sad about includes him and Sienna.
Wow, this became long, I better end it here. Update soon!
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This is such a great story it just has so many twists and unexpected things start to happen that sometimes it's hard to follow. Oh, and no matter what Spencer and Sienna have to be together still! He makes her happy and she makes him happy. Plus, Spencer never done anything to hurt Sienna so he doesnt deserve to get hurt. Riley, on the other hand, hurt for selfish reasons when her Ex just died and her best friend tried to do suicide! Not to mention she was pregnent! Spencer is really nice and Riley is an asshole! This story is like the Twilight Saga, minuis the vampires and stuff. Sienna is like Bella, being in love with two guys and all. Riley is like Edward, leaving her, in Riley's case making HER leave him. Finally, Spencers like Jacob, helps her out in her time of need, makes her happy, is promising to never hurt her, and loves her! But sadly he doesnt get the girl! The sparkly vampire does! It's sad really, your story reminds of it, because I wanted Jacob to be happy, bu tno he falls in love with a new born!
Plus, for some reason I think Amelia has a crush on Spencer. Cause all of the things she always sad about includes him and Sienna.
Wow, this became long, I better end it here. Update soon!
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