for Where I'll Leave Tomorrow12/3/2009 c2 
2righthere431
Ahaha they're so cute...but Riley is still better! I bet Sienna's going to win ahaha.
2righthere431Ahaha they're so cute...but Riley is still better! I bet Sienna's going to win ahaha.
12/2/2009 c9 RainyDay
I am a constant reader of your work and a terrible reviewer. That said, this is a great story-a lot better than some of the stories on this website-and I definitely feel that you should not stop writing. However, you might want to look in to posting on a website such as LiveJournal, where you could create an exclusive community to read and review your work. That way, if someone were to plagarize from there, you could narrow down who stole your work.
Just a thought.
Great ob and continue the good work!
I am a constant reader of your work and a terrible reviewer. That said, this is a great story-a lot better than some of the stories on this website-and I definitely feel that you should not stop writing. However, you might want to look in to posting on a website such as LiveJournal, where you could create an exclusive community to read and review your work. That way, if someone were to plagarize from there, you could narrow down who stole your work.
Just a thought.
Great ob and continue the good work!
11/30/2009 c9 XxButterflyxAngelxBabygirl
That was a great chapter! I hope Riley is okay. I really hope you can continue again, despite this plagiarism. I can understand if you are unable to, but I would really like it. Good luck, and I really hope this doesn't crush your dreams.
That was a great chapter! I hope Riley is okay. I really hope you can continue again, despite this plagiarism. I can understand if you are unable to, but I would really like it. Good luck, and I really hope this doesn't crush your dreams.
11/30/2009 c9 9arsenic3
u know what? i've changed my mind...i found the plagiariser on google search...and i think u need to protect ur work...i can't believe im saying this but its alright to take down the story if you have to...don't let ur dreams get crushed...ur story is awesome u have an amazing talent...PUBLISH YOUR WORK...and show that plagiariser that nothing can stop u...all my best wishes to you...
u know what? i've changed my mind...i found the plagiariser on google search...and i think u need to protect ur work...i can't believe im saying this but its alright to take down the story if you have to...don't let ur dreams get crushed...ur story is awesome u have an amazing talent...PUBLISH YOUR WORK...and show that plagiariser that nothing can stop u...all my best wishes to you...
11/30/2009 c9 9arsenic3
BTW 4got to say in my previous review...I HEART RILEY! thanks for bringing him back..(only to take him away so quickly again?)
BTW 4got to say in my previous review...I HEART RILEY! thanks for bringing him back..(only to take him away so quickly again?)
11/30/2009 c9 9arsenic3
NO NO NO NO please don't stop *sobbing* please *clinging to legs*...i told you that this was the only story worth reading in a long time...it would break my heart if you stopped please don't... *sniff sniff*
NO NO NO NO please don't stop *sobbing* please *clinging to legs*...i told you that this was the only story worth reading in a long time...it would break my heart if you stopped please don't... *sniff sniff*
11/30/2009 c9 Stacey672
Okay, first of all, I've been reading your stories for a while now. I'm sorry, I'm just REALLY bad with reviewing. I love your writing! It's not "newbie writing," if you know what I mean. It's not like you need a few stories to break in. You're already a great writer.
That said, I can't believe you would give up Sienna and Co. for a random person who liked your work and couldn't figure out how to express that sufficiently through a review. There are other ways, aside from fictionpress, to post your writing. You could check out authonomy .com, or maybe create your own website. If you don't want to completely give up fictionpress, you can keep the first chapter or two posted of each story, and in your author's note, direct your readers to the place you end up posting your work. This is all a suggestion, of course. =D
I hope this plagiarizer doesn't discourage you enough that you'll stop posting. Good luck with everything! =D
Okay, first of all, I've been reading your stories for a while now. I'm sorry, I'm just REALLY bad with reviewing. I love your writing! It's not "newbie writing," if you know what I mean. It's not like you need a few stories to break in. You're already a great writer.
That said, I can't believe you would give up Sienna and Co. for a random person who liked your work and couldn't figure out how to express that sufficiently through a review. There are other ways, aside from fictionpress, to post your writing. You could check out authonomy .com, or maybe create your own website. If you don't want to completely give up fictionpress, you can keep the first chapter or two posted of each story, and in your author's note, direct your readers to the place you end up posting your work. This is all a suggestion, of course. =D
I hope this plagiarizer doesn't discourage you enough that you'll stop posting. Good luck with everything! =D
11/29/2009 c9 1ohspastic
zomg :(. Stupid freaking people these days. I don't know what you're going through but i've seen it happen so many times. Hope you make it through hun. And yes, we're here for you :D.
I am sad that it might be the end :(. Take your time and think things through.
lovelove, lois.
1ohspasticzomg :(. Stupid freaking people these days. I don't know what you're going through but i've seen it happen so many times. Hope you make it through hun. And yes, we're here for you :D.
I am sad that it might be the end :(. Take your time and think things through.
lovelove, lois.
11/29/2009 c9 6nfgcassie
I cant believe you got plagarized. I mean I can believe it cause TLIW is THAT amazing but still! I hate that you feel like you shouldnt continue. It's sad because Sienna's story feels so real and it's like she wants her story told. I understand why you feel that way though. It doesnt mean its fair =/
6nfgcassieI cant believe you got plagarized. I mean I can believe it cause TLIW is THAT amazing but still! I hate that you feel like you shouldnt continue. It's sad because Sienna's story feels so real and it's like she wants her story told. I understand why you feel that way though. It doesnt mean its fair =/
11/29/2009 c9 29litgrl-luna
girl. dont let some dim-wit who copied your work crush you. you are an amazing writer and you should finish the story. i write like no one else on here, you have a pure gift, dont waste it. im loving this sequel as well, btw.
write form your heart and speak bluntly, Luna
29litgrl-lunagirl. dont let some dim-wit who copied your work crush you. you are an amazing writer and you should finish the story. i write like no one else on here, you have a pure gift, dont waste it. im loving this sequel as well, btw.
write form your heart and speak bluntly, Luna
11/29/2009 c9 4LaMeO1
i loved that he was back
i completely understand why you would want to stop writing and i'm pretty sure you have tons of fans that will also support you
but please don't stop posting
it sounds selfish but i can't help but ask you to keep posting
sienna's story is something that completely had my attention from the beginning of these lives i walk
i'd love to know how it ends...the way you want it to end
so please keep posting though if you don't i understand
awesome as usual
=D
4LaMeO1i loved that he was back
i completely understand why you would want to stop writing and i'm pretty sure you have tons of fans that will also support you
but please don't stop posting
it sounds selfish but i can't help but ask you to keep posting
sienna's story is something that completely had my attention from the beginning of these lives i walk
i'd love to know how it ends...the way you want it to end
so please keep posting though if you don't i understand
awesome as usual
=D
11/29/2009 c9 15Kit-Kat-KutieXD
OMG NO! That totally shucks, but I hope you will still be able to continue writing! It'd be fantastic if you can publish this story! There are soo many others who still need to read this! You can't take it down! but i kinda can guess at how upset you are, and I'd totally understand but still, NO! *sobz* This was a good chapter, but you can't just leave it there.
osm job! and i hope I am able to get to say that more to you. Shame on the plagerizer! Grr...
-Katt
15Kit-Kat-KutieXDOMG NO! That totally shucks, but I hope you will still be able to continue writing! It'd be fantastic if you can publish this story! There are soo many others who still need to read this! You can't take it down! but i kinda can guess at how upset you are, and I'd totally understand but still, NO! *sobz* This was a good chapter, but you can't just leave it there.
osm job! and i hope I am able to get to say that more to you. Shame on the plagerizer! Grr...
-Katt
11/29/2009 c9 kfjhbvasiuhvauvba
I saw My Sister's Keeper, I thought it was a pretty good movie.
Plagiarizers are the worst; they ruin all the good stories. That totally sucks though, I hope you could still get your work published, keep us posted on that! And I hope you still continue with this story, but if you choose not to I understand. Gee, just when the story was getting good. Hopefully, update soon?
nichloe
I saw My Sister's Keeper, I thought it was a pretty good movie.
Plagiarizers are the worst; they ruin all the good stories. That totally sucks though, I hope you could still get your work published, keep us posted on that! And I hope you still continue with this story, but if you choose not to I understand. Gee, just when the story was getting good. Hopefully, update soon?
nichloe
11/29/2009 c9 148tangledwebweweave
Okay, this was freaking good. I KNOW that Riley isn't over her yet.
This chapter made me forget about Sienna...and ALL about Spencer. I mean, you just write with such a captivating edge that it automatically sucks you in deeply! Goodness, I hope I can be half as good as you. :)
About the ACTUAL story: I love that Riley kinda got some sort of "payback" for wronging her, although the injuries were really bad, you didn't make them seem like it. I hate that he doesn't even feel anymore, but idk how guys work AT.ALL. But, I love where this is going!
Oh, I really, really love this:
"I’d changed too much in the last two years..."
And, O.M.G. I can't BELIEVE you were plagerized! How could they DO that to you? Please, please, PLEASE continue your work! It is MUCH too good to stop. I hate them for you (even though I'm American) and I wish you the best, because you deserve it. I know how you feel honey.
I hope your web gets untangled. :/
Great job. :)
148tangledwebweweaveOkay, this was freaking good. I KNOW that Riley isn't over her yet.
This chapter made me forget about Sienna...and ALL about Spencer. I mean, you just write with such a captivating edge that it automatically sucks you in deeply! Goodness, I hope I can be half as good as you. :)
About the ACTUAL story: I love that Riley kinda got some sort of "payback" for wronging her, although the injuries were really bad, you didn't make them seem like it. I hate that he doesn't even feel anymore, but idk how guys work AT.ALL. But, I love where this is going!
Oh, I really, really love this:
"I’d changed too much in the last two years..."
And, O.M.G. I can't BELIEVE you were plagerized! How could they DO that to you? Please, please, PLEASE continue your work! It is MUCH too good to stop. I hate them for you (even though I'm American) and I wish you the best, because you deserve it. I know how you feel honey.
I hope your web gets untangled. :/
Great job. :)