for To Assonate An Assassin10/23/2009 c1 konichiwa2u
Hey Alex, and true you have grammar you need to work on. The story's great! I can't wait to see what happens next! I await! _
Hey Alex, and true you have grammar you need to work on. The story's great! I can't wait to see what happens next! I await! _
10/21/2009 c1 ANewDayWillCome
Interseting plot. But a lot of work needs to be done. Grammatical errors are abundant... and more detail needs to be written in the story. Like what is the womans name? How does she look... etc. My intentions are not to be mean... because once again the plot is interesting.
Interseting plot. But a lot of work needs to be done. Grammatical errors are abundant... and more detail needs to be written in the story. Like what is the womans name? How does she look... etc. My intentions are not to be mean... because once again the plot is interesting.