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12/6/2009 c1 25Wakao

I know nothing about poems and am less-than-qualified to critique this one, except to tell you that I liked it.

The imagery was well done, by describing the wind's lofty arms and the sea anchor and yes. I don't like poetry, but I like this poem. You must be doing something right. :P


p.s. i would favorite it, but i have to consult my pardner, Indeed, first. see if she likes it too. i will however, author alert you.
10/19/2009 c1 lymli
I like the thought about the fears flying away.
10/19/2009 c1 4123HSMluver
Whoa that was really good! Really good! I especially loved the part;

Its image will cling in your memory,

cling in your mind.

If you just look closer.

Really good job!

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