for Look Closer12/6/2009 c1 
25Wakao
Hello!
I know nothing about poems and am less-than-qualified to critique this one, except to tell you that I liked it.
The imagery was well done, by describing the wind's lofty arms and the sea anchor and yes. I don't like poetry, but I like this poem. You must be doing something right. :P
-W
p.s. i would favorite it, but i have to consult my pardner, Indeed, first. see if she likes it too. i will however, author alert you.
25WakaoHello!
I know nothing about poems and am less-than-qualified to critique this one, except to tell you that I liked it.
The imagery was well done, by describing the wind's lofty arms and the sea anchor and yes. I don't like poetry, but I like this poem. You must be doing something right. :P
-W
p.s. i would favorite it, but i have to consult my pardner, Indeed, first. see if she likes it too. i will however, author alert you.
10/19/2009 c1 4123HSMluver
Whoa that was really good! Really good! I especially loved the part;
Its image will cling in your memory,
cling in your mind.
If you just look closer.
Really good job!
4123HSMluverWhoa that was really good! Really good! I especially loved the part;
Its image will cling in your memory,
cling in your mind.
If you just look closer.
Really good job!