for Dying Stars and Living Melodies12/2/2009 c3 We Used To Wait
Hey! I'm not going to lie, this chapter (and whole story so far) is kinda confusing. But I like the way you write, and I want to know more about each character- We barely know anything about them. :)
update soon.
love.
Hey! I'm not going to lie, this chapter (and whole story so far) is kinda confusing. But I like the way you write, and I want to know more about each character- We barely know anything about them. :)
update soon.
love.
11/24/2009 c2 We Used To Wait
The first chapter flowed so nicely, even though I really didn't know what was going on. What is the present, and how far are we into it? And I really don't know where this story is going.
Although the summary for this story sounded really cliche, but I can tell that this story has a different attitude than one that is. And why did I click on it? To tell you the truth, it was an accident. But then I read the first couple of paragraphs and decided to give the first chapter a glance -over. It was great.
But yeah, I'm not too sure where they story is headed.
But I'm curious, so I'll just stick around. :)
The first chapter flowed so nicely, even though I really didn't know what was going on. What is the present, and how far are we into it? And I really don't know where this story is going.
Although the summary for this story sounded really cliche, but I can tell that this story has a different attitude than one that is. And why did I click on it? To tell you the truth, it was an accident. But then I read the first couple of paragraphs and decided to give the first chapter a glance -over. It was great.
But yeah, I'm not too sure where they story is headed.
But I'm curious, so I'll just stick around. :)
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