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1/9/2010 c1 612simpleplan13
"I thought of it last night, once I took the last straw"... that seemed odd to me. Normally something else is the last straw. A person doesn't make it happen.

I also didn't get the counting part. What were you counting?

The piece is ok. It has a lot of emotion and is relateaeble, though a bit cliched.

PS If you're bored check out the Review game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile)
10/21/2009 c1 10Scarlet927
Great work, love the last 2 lines!

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