for From the Deeper Dark4/7/2014 c4 BirdLawSpec
Waw, this is awesome! So dark and twisted, really amazing!
I am head over Heals in love with those two, especially Gabriel ,I really like how he's starved for Damon's physical contact and affection, I think it's so cute despite it being all Stockholm syndromy and all . Who cares were all Pervs anyway
Thank you oh so very much for sharing!
Waw, this is awesome! So dark and twisted, really amazing!
I am head over Heals in love with those two, especially Gabriel ,I really like how he's starved for Damon's physical contact and affection, I think it's so cute despite it being all Stockholm syndromy and all . Who cares were all Pervs anyway
Thank you oh so very much for sharing!
11/16/2010 c7 Dark Lynnette
I'm not certain it was as romantic as disturbing. It was a great exploration of Stockholm, but I felt sad at the end. I don't feel like Damon got what he deserved. Hopefully, that's what you wanted. Quite disturbing and I completely understand why Gabriel did what he did. At least he's happy even if it's debatable whether that happiness is fabricated or real.
I'm not certain it was as romantic as disturbing. It was a great exploration of Stockholm, but I felt sad at the end. I don't feel like Damon got what he deserved. Hopefully, that's what you wanted. Quite disturbing and I completely understand why Gabriel did what he did. At least he's happy even if it's debatable whether that happiness is fabricated or real.
11/16/2010 c2 Dark Lynnette
Interesting premise. I like your writing style and the tone is definitely creepy.
Interesting premise. I like your writing style and the tone is definitely creepy.
8/2/2010 c7 
2lostrealmsdreams
Wow...it's kind of scary to think that that's actually what goes through some people's minds when they get kidnapped...but it was still a REALLY good story. You're an amazing author.
2lostrealmsdreamsWow...it's kind of scary to think that that's actually what goes through some people's minds when they get kidnapped...but it was still a REALLY good story. You're an amazing author.
3/28/2010 c7 3Nofro
Maybe because everything happened so fast it seemed to me the boy didn't had backbone at all. He could struggle for more than week. And I didn't see any more interest in Damon for him than just as experiment.
If you had explained of the matters like boy had grown up in highest society and couldn't adjust to cold room, not even to one night. And that man was truly interested in him. Some explanation was missing.
Three month - I believe it is possible to break someone, but in the end all he did was just make someone who's nothing without him.
It would truly be great story if there would be more explanation and description of feeling. He just started to miss that man, just like that? There had to be issues, like food at first and then maybe loneliness adjustment to other person.
I hope you don't mind, I told what I think.
3NofroMaybe because everything happened so fast it seemed to me the boy didn't had backbone at all. He could struggle for more than week. And I didn't see any more interest in Damon for him than just as experiment.
If you had explained of the matters like boy had grown up in highest society and couldn't adjust to cold room, not even to one night. And that man was truly interested in him. Some explanation was missing.
Three month - I believe it is possible to break someone, but in the end all he did was just make someone who's nothing without him.
It would truly be great story if there would be more explanation and description of feeling. He just started to miss that man, just like that? There had to be issues, like food at first and then maybe loneliness adjustment to other person.
I hope you don't mind, I told what I think.
3/28/2010 c7 1llll.The Fallen.llll
wow this story is absolutely amazing,twisted but amazing.It's quite beautiful, I love the ending,its so very touching. I really like it! And i hope i will read some more stories of yours like this one. :)
1llll.The Fallen.llllwow this story is absolutely amazing,twisted but amazing.It's quite beautiful, I love the ending,its so very touching. I really like it! And i hope i will read some more stories of yours like this one. :)
12/4/2009 c7 3disgusteddiscussion
I'm sad that it's so short, but I know what you mean about dragging stories past their endings.
I love it! I actually was feeling close to tears at the end. You should be very proud of yourself - Stockholm Syndrome is really hard to spin into true romance (I've tried) and you did so very well. Kudos :)
3disgusteddiscussionI'm sad that it's so short, but I know what you mean about dragging stories past their endings.
I love it! I actually was feeling close to tears at the end. You should be very proud of yourself - Stockholm Syndrome is really hard to spin into true romance (I've tried) and you did so very well. Kudos :)
12/4/2009 c7 2Night's-Freedom
WHOOP WHOOP! lol
HEY!
Aw this chappie is awesome :D They finally got back together YAY!
Well, I hope u have a good week and that there's more to the story and that we'll get it soon. It's my birthday yanno, so u have to do as I say lol, nd i say update soon ;D
Pwitty pweez :P
BYE!
x x x
2Night's-FreedomWHOOP WHOOP! lol
HEY!
Aw this chappie is awesome :D They finally got back together YAY!
Well, I hope u have a good week and that there's more to the story and that we'll get it soon. It's my birthday yanno, so u have to do as I say lol, nd i say update soon ;D
Pwitty pweez :P
BYE!
x x x
12/4/2009 c7 LDNLad
At first I was a little disappointed because I wanted more, but a couple of seconds later I came to my senses and realised that that was the PERFECT ending to this story! This is *definitely* one of my favorites. xD
Stunning stuff, my friend!
At first I was a little disappointed because I wanted more, but a couple of seconds later I came to my senses and realised that that was the PERFECT ending to this story! This is *definitely* one of my favorites. xD
Stunning stuff, my friend!