for People Watching11/16/2015 c1 DauntlessBitch
...i kinda feel like allie is like a super awkward fifteen-year-old. she's a sophomore in college and she hasn't done ANYTHING? just saying.
still, loved alex's total bluntness and the classic cameronXerin interaction. nice job!
...i kinda feel like allie is like a super awkward fifteen-year-old. she's a sophomore in college and she hasn't done ANYTHING? just saying.
still, loved alex's total bluntness and the classic cameronXerin interaction. nice job!
9/28/2015 c1 Guest
EEK EEK EEK I LOVED IT JUST LOVED IT
EEK EEK EEK I LOVED IT JUST LOVED IT
10/31/2009 c1 
19toffeecakesxox
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adorable! ^^
haha, i love Alex.
if only the guys i know were that straightforward.
19toffeecakesxox:]
adorable! ^^
haha, i love Alex.
if only the guys i know were that straightforward.
10/25/2009 c1 natmarie
Adorable, cliche, but those are always my favorite. This is well written. My only qualms would be not quite getting to know the characters some and them sort of floating in space. It's very dialogue based so sometimes I forget where they are/what's going on. Kind of movie like, but I can't picture the background. Maybe I am just picky like that. Cute idea though and love the ending.
Adorable, cliche, but those are always my favorite. This is well written. My only qualms would be not quite getting to know the characters some and them sort of floating in space. It's very dialogue based so sometimes I forget where they are/what's going on. Kind of movie like, but I can't picture the background. Maybe I am just picky like that. Cute idea though and love the ending.
10/24/2009 c1 2asianinvasion0530
Well if it makes you feel any better, I thought it was cute! =]
And this might sound creepy, but I visited your profile to see what kind of person you are, and we are really alike - it's almost scary. Like most of your books are my favorite and the movies too. Plus I'm assuming you go to Princeton and that's totally like my dream school. I loved it when I visited it.
But anyways, I'm sorry some creepy guy hit on you in NYC, but I couldn't help laughing about it. I probably wouldn't if it happened to me though.
2asianinvasion0530Well if it makes you feel any better, I thought it was cute! =]
And this might sound creepy, but I visited your profile to see what kind of person you are, and we are really alike - it's almost scary. Like most of your books are my favorite and the movies too. Plus I'm assuming you go to Princeton and that's totally like my dream school. I loved it when I visited it.
But anyways, I'm sorry some creepy guy hit on you in NYC, but I couldn't help laughing about it. I probably wouldn't if it happened to me though.
10/24/2009 c1 fallingpanicamore002
Ha, I laughed when Alex said, "I really want to kiss you right now." (Something my own first kiss said before we kissed. Well, technically it was more along the lines of, "I want to kiss you right now, I think I'm just going to do it already in front of everyone." Then I talked him out of it. Well...okay forget it.)
Anyway, awesome start to a story! Keep it coming!
Ha, I laughed when Alex said, "I really want to kiss you right now." (Something my own first kiss said before we kissed. Well, technically it was more along the lines of, "I want to kiss you right now, I think I'm just going to do it already in front of everyone." Then I talked him out of it. Well...okay forget it.)
Anyway, awesome start to a story! Keep it coming!
10/24/2009 c1 Copril
Aww, that was so sweet! I wish it wasn't a one-shot. :/ Oh well,
it will just have to go to my favourites instead of alerts... :)
Oh, and the perfume guy? I'd be so freaked out if that
happened to me in real-life, I'd probably just blush and run
away. xD
Aww, that was so sweet! I wish it wasn't a one-shot. :/ Oh well,
it will just have to go to my favourites instead of alerts... :)
Oh, and the perfume guy? I'd be so freaked out if that
happened to me in real-life, I'd probably just blush and run
away. xD
10/23/2009 c1 windybidindy
hahah i love it already :]
i just hope you update soon cause i just cant wait for the next chapter! i hope you dont become one of those authors who dont update their amazing story for a long time! D;
hahah i love it already :]
i just hope you update soon cause i just cant wait for the next chapter! i hope you dont become one of those authors who dont update their amazing story for a long time! D;