for Left at the Crooked Pine11/18/2010 c1 
3yinachan
Hey! :)
Well, this seems pretty interesting, though it's a bit hard to read because there were several run-ons in the story. They distract the readers and actually make them lose interest, so your readers will love you more if you could fix those errors. I strongly recommend that you read out your work aloud to yourself or to someone else so you could root out these errors in your work, because they kinda destroy the quality of your writing.
I haven't read much into the story yet, but I shall come back and check it out again once the errors get fixed, because I have such a short attention span that I don't like being distracted when I read. I hope you understand, and I'm really sorry.
Keep on writing and practicing! :)
3yinachanHey! :)
Well, this seems pretty interesting, though it's a bit hard to read because there were several run-ons in the story. They distract the readers and actually make them lose interest, so your readers will love you more if you could fix those errors. I strongly recommend that you read out your work aloud to yourself or to someone else so you could root out these errors in your work, because they kinda destroy the quality of your writing.
I haven't read much into the story yet, but I shall come back and check it out again once the errors get fixed, because I have such a short attention span that I don't like being distracted when I read. I hope you understand, and I'm really sorry.
Keep on writing and practicing! :)
11/4/2010 c10 3EdenR
Just so you know I may not review every chapter unless it's been a significant amount of time since the last time I reviewed or I have something significant to say. Just asking you to update is a waste of my time since I've already subscribed to your story and that lets you know I'm reading.
I don't want to sound mean by saying this but not that much has happened yet and I'm waiting for the major conflict/relationship between Bianca and Mitchell to really blossom. This story has a lot of potential and has had a great start, I'm just waiting to see where you actually take it.
3EdenRJust so you know I may not review every chapter unless it's been a significant amount of time since the last time I reviewed or I have something significant to say. Just asking you to update is a waste of my time since I've already subscribed to your story and that lets you know I'm reading.
I don't want to sound mean by saying this but not that much has happened yet and I'm waiting for the major conflict/relationship between Bianca and Mitchell to really blossom. This story has a lot of potential and has had a great start, I'm just waiting to see where you actually take it.
10/13/2010 c8 12Raised with Fangs
awesome story! im like in love! (with the story... Awkward...) anyway, update quickly!
12Raised with Fangsawesome story! im like in love! (with the story... Awkward...) anyway, update quickly!
10/9/2010 c7 naz292
wow... i didnt expect this!
1- i didnt look at my last email which was thios...right after i read ur email...so i was very suprised that this was updated made me very happy
2- the end of the story...aw! i loved it
can wait! love naz xx
wow... i didnt expect this!
1- i didnt look at my last email which was thios...right after i read ur email...so i was very suprised that this was updated made me very happy
2- the end of the story...aw! i loved it
can wait! love naz xx
10/9/2010 c7 smrae
hah I love it! Its his gentlemanly duty...aka he wants her he just doesn't know it yet ;)lol
hah I love it! Its his gentlemanly duty...aka he wants her he just doesn't know it yet ;)lol
10/9/2010 c6 smrae
say what! haha great cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what happens! He's a Duke which definitely makes him way more important in society's eyes and they will marry because Bianca's reputation is ruined! haha but I could be wrong lol Can't wait to see what happens next!
say what! haha great cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what happens! He's a Duke which definitely makes him way more important in society's eyes and they will marry because Bianca's reputation is ruined! haha but I could be wrong lol Can't wait to see what happens next!
10/9/2010 c5 smrae
I'm so happy they finally kissed especially with the tension Mitchell was emitting. It had to happen with him shirtless too haha ;)
I'm so happy they finally kissed especially with the tension Mitchell was emitting. It had to happen with him shirtless too haha ;)
10/9/2010 c4 smrae
omg I always wanted to wear a plaid! I think they are so cool! Loved this chapter! They finally get to meet
omg I always wanted to wear a plaid! I think they are so cool! Loved this chapter! They finally get to meet
10/9/2010 c3 smrae
gah curiosity killed the cat haha silly Bianca at least hottie highwayman found her. I like how you go into more detail in this chapter. Some of your other chapters are a bit to quick. I don't know if that makes sense. haha
gah curiosity killed the cat haha silly Bianca at least hottie highwayman found her. I like how you go into more detail in this chapter. Some of your other chapters are a bit to quick. I don't know if that makes sense. haha
10/9/2010 c1 smrae
Omg Awkward for Bianca haha and when Lucas says he's a 'high man' it's the cutest thing ever. The beginning is very cute
Omg Awkward for Bianca haha and when Lucas says he's a 'high man' it's the cutest thing ever. The beginning is very cute