for When He Dumps You3/19/2011 c1 
1JustWords
OMG! GREATEST ONE SHOT EVER! Don't know what it is about two people doing something together, something happening, and when it all gets better, they realize their feelings, but I loove stories like this.
Enough with the late night ramble, would love more on these characters, or stories like this :D Fictionpress should have a 'stories like this' button or something.. hmm...
Great story! Cheers!
1JustWordsOMG! GREATEST ONE SHOT EVER! Don't know what it is about two people doing something together, something happening, and when it all gets better, they realize their feelings, but I loove stories like this.
Enough with the late night ramble, would love more on these characters, or stories like this :D Fictionpress should have a 'stories like this' button or something.. hmm...
Great story! Cheers!
2/26/2011 c1 25Kyllex
Really, really cute. I love Oliver, and his name! Ollie. It's so cute. Haha.
This was cliche, but I liked it a lot. Danny and Gary are terrible. Poor Clarisse!
Anyway, your writing is awesome, and this was wonderful. Good job!
25KyllexReally, really cute. I love Oliver, and his name! Ollie. It's so cute. Haha.
This was cliche, but I liked it a lot. Danny and Gary are terrible. Poor Clarisse!
Anyway, your writing is awesome, and this was wonderful. Good job!
9/11/2010 c1 3HPRK08
First, this story should get WAY more recognition, it's really really good!
I like the characters, the story line, and descriptions.. It's all perfect. Really well done!
~HPRK
3HPRK08First, this story should get WAY more recognition, it's really really good!
I like the characters, the story line, and descriptions.. It's all perfect. Really well done!
~HPRK
7/17/2010 c1 tea.bags
Hey... just two things, I think it's antiseptic, not antibiotic. And at the end she piles and then 2 secs later they kiss? But anyways. Good story :)
Hey... just two things, I think it's antiseptic, not antibiotic. And at the end she piles and then 2 secs later they kiss? But anyways. Good story :)
6/30/2010 c1 7Ardendale
I absolutely loved this. It was very well written, and I liked that it was long enough to actually understand the characters and the story line. It was great! :)
7ArdendaleI absolutely loved this. It was very well written, and I liked that it was long enough to actually understand the characters and the story line. It was great! :)
6/5/2010 c1 huimei
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5/30/2010 c1 blubbfreak
Cute story, but I think it's a little weird that Oliver is kissing her after she just had to puke... :-) But maybe that's a sign of real love.
Cute story, but I think it's a little weird that Oliver is kissing her after she just had to puke... :-) But maybe that's a sign of real love.
5/30/2010 c1 3Katie Valentine
I like this! Bah, so sweet.. It made me smile! Though I wish it was longer.. They got to know each other only for a day.. LOL. :D
3Katie ValentineI like this! Bah, so sweet.. It made me smile! Though I wish it was longer.. They got to know each other only for a day.. LOL. :D