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for In The End, No Smile Will Help

11/4/2009 c1 9writingpistachio
DUDE! I LOVE IT! IT'S AWESOME, and the suspense is amazingly done! You could've stretched the suspense out more, but... wow. Just amazing. I love how the suspense was carefully let out of the balloon, until finally, "In the end," the last sentence came and killed half a million.

Amazing. =]

~writingpistachio

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